Possessed Kingdom

[Moderator]

00:02, 14th Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Septimus]

after what I told you, you still submit your map without following the rules... zzzz

 

[Krl70]

You have to do more than changing names, placing units, and basic triggers to get a approved map on THW, Get someone to check your grammar, go to
this page: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/faq/resourcerules/#faq_maprules and get to work, for now i bet you 5€ that this map is going to be rejected until updated.

 

[BlackKnightTGS]

Looks like your other maps, has typos, and everything else your other maps had. Go to some tutorials and try to improve your maps, then update them.

 

[-Kobas-]

King Arius and Huginn Ironcliff are friends who ruled well in this land until a powerful demon possessed their people.
Since they are strong and powerful enough to be possessed, they will face execution in the arena of death!

PLEASE COMMENT PEOPLE, THANKS!!!

THW Rule:
Presentation: Maps must have adequate spelling and grammar. Maps must contain a valid author and map name. Maps must contain a proper description of what the map is about.
Currently you broke this rule and maybe few others, but I must check map to see that!
Maybe you think that map description here on THW isn't important but thrust me, if you use 20 words to describe your map no one will want to play it, why, because we don't know anything about your map!
Add screenshots, write credit list, change log, map features, colorize description, add boxes etc etc...
Here check this one:
The importance of a Description [09 May 2009 17:41]ap0calypse
and BB code list!
You can also check Map Description - Templates just to see what your description need to be acceptable and why!
Also don't forget to check:
Polishing Your Game [24 May 2010 15:55]N1ghthawk

PLEASE IMPROVE DESCRIPTION, THANKS!!!