Here's my story of "Piggy, the Piloterate"
Many years ago, there were flying sheep. These sheep were the result of sheep's mating with fellow eagles. These sheep could be hatched from eggs as a result. However, unknown to mankind, there was a certain creature that could be born. It was born from the birth of the pig and the condor. This creature had been called Piggy by a scientist. The only one of its kind, Piggy had sought to find a future. He traveled the world on a journey to find a mate. On his way around the world, he met an eagle. To him, the eagle said "Hello fellow winged creature! Would you like me as a mate?". As a response, Piggy said, "Begone evil creature before I strike you down! Besides, your ugly!". As a backfire, the eagle told him, "Beware pig, if you don't mate soon, you'll be sorry!". Then Piggy flew around the world looking. On his way, he saw a condor. "Hello flying creature! Mate with me!". As a response, he told her, "No way you ugly crow! Your uglier than an eagle! Begone before I run you down!". Back to him, the eagle said, "Beware pig, if you don't find a mate, you'll be sorry!". Piggy kept flying and flying until he saw a glimpse. Downwards, he saw a beautiful creature. He got closer and closer, and saw a pig. To her he said, "Oh sweet beautiful creature! Please be my mate!". To him as a response, the pig told him, "Oh I would love to be your mate!". However, at the finish of that sentence, a gun was fired, and that was the end of Piggy, the Piggy Pilot, the first and last flying pig of the world.
Still, love the model. It gave me a story idea and its original. 5/5 but could be improved in some little ways. But, the little improvements would increase its size. Still, fix the mouth UW.
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