Paladin Battle 1.1v

[Moderator]

22:53, 8th Nov 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Very low quality.

 

[Vengeancekael]

uhm remake the description(rules violation)

 

[Darth_Malak]

This map is to simple. U just created some trees, and 6 paladins (u added blink to them but thats all u changed), and 2 fountains (They are imba...)

 

[X-OMG-X]

You have change the description.
Havent tested the map but Darth Malak say that you nearly havent done anything.
Its not a rule but it will get rejected if you dont do something with it.

 

[BwForka]

its map for killing time

 

[BwForka]

You have change the description.
Havent tested the map but Darth Malak say that you nearly havent done anything.
Its not a rule but it will get rejected if you dont do something with it.

whats the problem whit discription

 

[X-OMG-X]

Dont double post!!

Btw, you cant see what the problem is?
There is almost nothing.
Take a look at my map Gareck the Commander, i have wrote a small but still acceptable description.
Try to tell about what the map is about, its features, why people should download it and something about the heroes/story/gameplay.

 

[Darth_Malak]

choice one of the Paladins and fight for victory

I guess thats all he could tell us about the map..

 

[BwForka]

Dont double post!!

Btw, you cant see what the problem is?
There is almost nothing.
Take a look at my map Gareck the Commander, i have wrote a small but still acceptable description.
Try to tell about what the map is about, its features, why people should download it and something about the heroes/story/gameplay.

ah i forgot about the story

 

[MortAr]

Dont double post!!

Btw, you cant see what the problem is?
There is almost nothing.
Take a look at my map Gareck the Commander, i have wrote a small but still acceptable description.
Try to tell about what the map is about, its features, why people should download it and something about the heroes/story/gameplay.

Nice advertisement.

 

[Vengeancekael]

MortAr-, he was just trying to explain to him how a description should be.
But i would suggest ap0calypse's tutorial:link

 

[Aesthetics]

Yo, make way for the wannabe map moderator.

Seriously? If you won't after reading my review, reveal the below.

Review

The terrain has no variation at all, you just spammed trees around the map, leaving room in the center. 6 paladins fighting each other? Too simple, no skill or even luck required. Anyone can place units and edit their abilities. The description really sucks (but then again, how can you get a better description without actual gameplay?) It looks like you're trying to use "smart" words, but you're doing it wrong.
I also see no use of triggers. In fact, you haven't even removed the Melee triggers. It seems like you're just trying to spread your name and accumulate reputation.

Rating: 1/5

Voted for Rejection.

Stuff you can Fix

- Add in-depth Gameplay (such as various factors that affect victory)
- Fix the description (rules violation)
- Use actual terrain (just go look at the campaign terrain made by Blizzard)
- Polish the map (spelling, grammar, mini-map preview, loading screen, etc)
- Use triggers, or something!

You should take a peek at the great tutorials we have here at the Hive. Proper knowledge makes good maps!

With that said, good luck with your future of map making.

P.S. ap0calypse, don't scare him away with your godly powers.

 

[Dark Soul]

Well a map to pass time... A real pass timer game is run kitty run or slide ninja slide, fast, fun, exciting. This map is too simple, the hero skills are the same except you added blink which overall has no difference, and its not fun and exciting. Even simple maps requires effort. Get your back into it and recreate your map! Looking forward to it!

 

[BwForka]

Yo, make way for the wannabe map moderator.

Seriously? If you won't after reading my review, reveal the below.

Review

The terrain has no variation at all, you just spammed trees around the map, leaving room in the center. 6 paladins fighting each other? Too simple, no skill or even luck required. Anyone can place units and edit their abilities. The description really sucks (but then again, how can you get a better description without actual gameplay?) It looks like you're trying to use "smart" words, but you're doing it wrong.
I also see no use of triggers. In fact, you haven't even removed the Melee triggers. It seems like you're just trying to spread your name and accumulate reputation.

Rating: 1/5

Voted for Rejection.

Stuff you can Fix

- Add in-depth Gameplay (such as various factors that affect victory)
- Fix the description (rules violation)
- Use actual terrain (just go look at the campaign terrain made by Blizzard)
- Polish the map (spelling, grammar, mini-map preview, loading screen, etc)
- Use triggers, or something!

You should take a peek at the great tutorials we have here at the Hive. Proper knowledge makes good maps!

With that said, good luck with your future of map making.

P.S. ap0calypse, don't scare him away with your godly powers.

 

[Aesthetics]

Spam alert.

 

[krisserz]

Eeee... Ehem... It`s... kinda... err... fail?
I`m not gonna waste my keybard for a list of things, that suck on this map, cause all is already told by aesthetics, and it will take a lot of space. I`ll maybe write what is good in this map, OK?
So, the good points of this map are:
-... nothing
- oh no, wait, I found one! It is working!

It may be brutal, but that`s the truth. I give it 1/5.
"Maps" like this can be made in 2 minutes... Please, put on Hive maps, that are well made. You didn`t do anything to make this map... less primitive.

 

[ap0calypse]

P.S. ap0calypse, don't scare him away with your godly powers.

I won't ^^ (I think :s)

Okay, here it goes:
The terrain is horrible, there is no real gameplay as far as I've seen, the triggers... ehh, do you know how to open the trigger editor?
The objects are all standard and the description is still a mess.

Open a new map, place a few random stuff and you've got the same map.
In fact: I dare to bet I could make something that is funnier than this in 5 minutes.

I guess you should be happy 1/5 is the minimum rating a map can have, which is still 20%...

Edit: Right, I wasn't supposed to scare you away -.-
So, erm... you know, there's always a second time (or a third, fourth, fifth, ...), perhaps try thinking of an actual game next time and, please, learn more about the world editor ^^