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23:47, 13th Jun 2009
shamanyouranus: It looks pretty nice, and the file size is great. But please, fix the fire. Fire is not red, nor does it even get red at the edges. Try making it transition from a light peach color, to light orange, to a medium orange. Also, there is only need for one fire particle emitter, not two. And for the smoke, try using the Blend filter with dark gray colors. Otherwise it looks like they're burning toxic waste or something. Also, if you can, use a better wood texture, this one just does not look very good. Fix these things, and it should be approve-able.
2nd Jul 2009
Pyritie: Looks great! Much better than the old version.
shamanyouranus: It looks pretty nice, and the file size is great. But please, fix the fire. Fire is not red, nor does it even get red at the edges. Try making it transition from a light peach color, to light orange, to a medium orange. Also, there is only need for one fire particle emitter, not two. And for the smoke, try using the Blend filter with dark gray colors. Otherwise it looks like they're burning toxic waste or something. Also, if you can, use a better wood texture, this one just does not look very good. Fix these things, and it should be approve-able.
2nd Jul 2009
Pyritie: Looks great! Much better than the old version.