Nothern Remains

[Landmine]

My first terrain, has a small story to it. Spent some time on this.

Long ago, Humans took to the north of the world. Finding a cold dead continent, they almost left but the riches found below the snow were just enough to keep them. This mining camp built into a chasm lead to a rising trade route through the north. The base was defended against the Undead continuously. However, the Undead eventually attacked in a lethal force, leaving burning ruins behind with no one to save it. Now the harsh weather hides the remains, covering the battle and its history.

 

[Celaquil]

I kind of like it. But the fact that the ground is covered in snow and those mountains and rocks are not... Just seems wrong, not to mention that the contrast between the rocks and the snow seems... A bit too much. Other than that there isn't really that much going on, but hell, look who's speaking

Fairly good job, just work a bit more on details and reality

 

[takakenji]

very sex.

 

[Craka_J]

Nice use of rocks for the mountains, such as the one on the left. However, you placed too many rock doodads and it looks too repetitive. I would advise using less rocks and instead increase the size of some rocks maybe.

Parts of the terrain look a tad too plain, mainly where the snow is and around the bridge. Maybe create a forest of tiny trees to make the terrain look larger and more interesting?

Other than that, a nice job for a first terrain.

 

[Wildberry]

nice for a first terrain rocks are eh but still good

 

[thedeathunterxx]

i agree wit keiji. I like the idea and the doodad use, but the rocks arnt that outstanding. Im not sure what kind of substitute you should use, but definetly not those rocks. the texture is just too ugly.