looks ok??? looks like...let's just say this is less than avarege, the hatching is realy bad, it needs to be more uniform, not randomly in all directions. And for crying out loud, don't smudge pencils, it looks very ugly.
And what do I think of it? I think it's very ugly (the drawing, not the character...wich by the way, it's ugly too...note that I wanted to say it's crappy, but I retained myself) and messy. No offense, but you told us to say what we think.