Need constant suggestions for improvements of my skins.

[Apheraz Lucent]

Hi there. I need constant suggestions about skins I will made. They will go here before they are uploaded, and when you think that it's good enough, it will be uploaded on The Hive. Helpful suggestions will be rewarded via +2 reputation.

First of all, I would like suggestions for the Emma Frost skin I am making. She is supposed to have team colors, but I don't know where to place them! Any suggestions on this skin would be appreciated.

Thanks forward.

The skin is right here: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/skins-552/xmanemmafrostbyapheraz-blp-177944/

 

[Dentothor]

If you are asking for a full review from an experienced artist, then i would be happy to give one on each of the skins you upload from emma frost forward.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

That's what I need :3

 

[Dentothor]

Very well. Ill give you a full review tommorrow.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

As far as I know, you can only add team-colour to her skirt and shoulders. You could add runes or similar. It might not go well with the white, though.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

That's the problem :S

 

[Dentothor]

i hope you know i HAVE done the review.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Thanks very much! I would like now the reviews of two other skins I made in meanwhile.
First, the Succubus one. I was suprised when I found out that it takes less than 50% of skin!
Tell me fixes, improvements and solutions.

It took me a while to create that spooky smile (Die smiling) and I added glowing eyes in meanwhile, which is not visible in here.

 

[xDeathKnightx]

I think Your succubus skin looks really good!

Even though i am not a professional art designer, i still think that looks awesome.
I'd give it 5/5.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Thanks
It got rejected, but will work again on it soon.

 

[Dionesiist]

Right now it's very generic, sorry to say. You can certainly slip in a lot more details. Trims on armor are usually a good idea, and you can also go creative with revealing clothing without having it be just a regular two-piece [or whatever they're called.]