Its still incredibly messy. in comparison to the old one, its an improvement, but this is still a little ways away from being approved. I know you have this kind of fear of the skin looking monotone, but we dont want a rainbow (and honestly i think you have all 7 colours of the whole damn rainbow).
dont pick colours from the opposite ends of the spectrum where it doesnt compliment the skin. Like the eyes. the green can compliment the blue, but with that colour of clothing, its a very conflicting colour.you need to focus on what looks good, and not just what works.
adding texture to differentiate skin from cloth is good too.you dont need to have an opposite colour to represent the clothing. Just a good texture difference . Other than that, yes its an improvement. Is it approvable, Not at all at this point. but continue trying.