My Second Terrain

[Xzife_TD01]

I tried to replicate one of my favorite Islands from Magic the Gathering, a card game i play. I attached a pic of the card as well so you can judge how i did replicating it. c&c and general terraining tips welcome!

 

[Oziris]

The rocks aren't like in the picture 1 and i dont see grass in ypur picture...Needs much work!

 

[Jetherit]

Don't abuse those rocks >_>. Its a good terrain in simple terms, but I agree it still needs work.

 

[DungeonM]

I'd give the terrain a little more height and a little less width to make the island stand out more. Maybe try a custom water model too.

 

[~Void~]

It lacks the atmosphere that the card picture has and the effect. The palms should be more bent, and they are out of proportion with the rest. In the real picture, to me it looks like the island is like 20 feet away from the first palm tree, so instead of just scaling stuff down, put it a bit further back too. Or maybe zoom out and make everything bigger.

 

[Gilles]

The palms need to be bent. The middle trees need to be the same color as the picture, and the rocks need work. Place more shrubs around them.

Make the island go farther into the distance. It ends too quick. Also add a white distance fog.