My new terrain!

[omerpaz]

Hi guys I saw some of the terrains around and I thought to myself: "Why wouldn't I make my own?"
So I made a view from a valley, I think it got out pretty good, tell me your opinion:

First Map

*Image fixed*

Update 0.1:

 

[dust77]

sry i dono others but i don see the pic?

 

[Darkyvm]

Post the image as an attachment, I can't see it either.

 

[omerpaz]

*Fixed*. Sry xD

 

[dust77]

bit too much floting tree
how about put some small rock or grass to cover it?
for overall i give 6/10
cos u got kinda nice sky

 

[omerpaz]

I will fix this later
Thanks

 

[Nbah]

Sky and fog don't match. If your sky is blue you should make a more light fog. In this instance you made a very heavy yellow fog which suggest's dawn.

 

[Luckerguy]

Not bad for your first Terrain.

Please keep your work up and try to improve it. You are not that bad.

 

[omerpaz]

Well thanks guys I will work on that and improve. Nbah, what fog color should I put?

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Well, this is much, much better than my first terrain! +rep for that.
But some trees are floating, use the ctrl+page up/down to lower or rais things.

 

[~Void~]

That dip in the hills should be raised at least a little bit, or you should put something behind it.

 

[hawk_767]

Like people have said, the trees are floating in places so try lowering them. Also something that kind of looks weird to me is the ferns. They are really bright compared to the other green around the area. You could try tinting them just a little bit. Not to copy the color of everything else but to make it blend in a bit more. They kind of stand out right now.

 

[ArcticInferno]

I think you should use another fern or get rid of them.

 

[Nbah]

Well thanks guys I will work on that and improve. Nbah, what fog color should I put?

I'm not sure. Your best bet would be to experiment. Try to use light blue, light yellow, maybe even white (not sure). You should try many of them, though I would suggest them to be light not heavy as u have used.

 

[omerpaz]

*Updated*
I changed the fog color and the floating trees
How's it now?

 

[ArcticInferno]

Much better I like it! +rep

 

[omerpaz]

Thanks guys
Anything else to improve?

 

[omerpaz]

Please reply

 

[Dia3olus]

At the middle it is a bit too flat. in my opinion you should use different tiles and change the doodadplacement above them. like dirt or grassy dirt
At the background at the mountains i would use more trees to hide the terrain behind it. it is only grass, and grass is everywhere on this pic.

 

[Malcous]

great!