My first terrain, feedbacks are highly welcome

[David_89]

Hi, this is my first terrain and it is actually for the current Terraining Contest #11 - Battlefields but I have remade it into another battlefield, so I decided to upload this first terrain to Terrain Board to get more feedbacks and criticisms to improve my terrain.

 

[Nyuu]

I can see many units..but where is landscape?..terrain is flat and borrng

 

[David_89]

Oooppsss, sorry I forgotten to add doodads such as flowers and shrubs on the terrain. Here, I have made changes, how is it? still need changes?

 

[Mallaboro]

Oooppsss, sorry I forgotten to add doodads such as flowers and shrubs on the terrain. Here, I have made changes, how is it? still need changes?

Mind = blown. Whats with the sorceress in the middle?

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[David_89]

Mind = blown. Whats with the sorceress in the middle?

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Footmans are hiding at the back of the bush.

 

[Megafyr]

You should read some tutorial on making terrains. Units + no imports usually is a no no.

 

[fladdermasken]

Additionally to what Megafyr said, you should take the time to just observe other terrains to get the proper idea of how terrains should be executed.
The Legendary Thread is a good place to start.

 

[M0rbid]

It always looks arrogant and bad to link to your own stuff, but hell, this might be helpful to you, too : http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...e-terraining-hives-terraining-section-184427/

 

[David_89]

Oh I see...ok, I will, thank you for advices and criticsms... I will start on reading tutorials and will post it up again when I have done some...