My First TD

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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Oct/13 14:03:19
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Comment: [Rejected]

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[torques]

Currently Rating: My First TD by alibb, tiancai

Positive (+) | Ok (=) | Negative (-) | Other (#)

+Has a Leaderboard
+Upgrade Shop (Research)

=Has a starting Hero which has abilities
=Has variety of towers
=Enough Levels
=Different types of unit (Air,Ground,Boss,Immune)

-Singleplayer
-Map is quite small
-Terrain isn't very great, looks very plain
-Nothing special about many other "Old" tower defense.
-It gets bored very quickly
-No other custom Race / Heroes

Rating: 2/5 (Score is calculated from the Pros/Cons above)

*The description isn't the well done too. Improve it with BBCodes.
*Credit is very important, list down all the Author/People names in your description if you use their Resources. If not, just put credits of yourself maybe.
*You really need to improve the game, more towers, make the maze longer?
*Make the terrain nicer, maybe add some trees, doodads.
*Maybe some "Custom" abilities for some towers
*Add more heroes and make a selection for the players to choose
*Add more Race, builder and make a selection for the players to choose

Final Rating: 2/5 - 1.5 = 0.5/5

i dunno wat rating the give actually. it's just a 0 rate or kind enough for a 0.5 as this map doesn't really interest me. since it's your first map though, keep up the 'great' work and maybe look for some tutorials out there or in Hiveworkshop

 

[Tanasren]

lol@ratingguys

imma test it, but I don't think a title like that would attract people

EDIT :

I tested it.

So main problem is, it becomes boring at 50% of the map.
Also there are many places where you should be able to build but there are invisible "red" tiles, so you can't build there...
The summoning guard tower kept summoning in a place where guards couldn't attack because I didn't place it very close to the road.

 

[Orcnet]

My First TD (No Version/s Stated)

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	5/5	91-100	A

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	4/5	81-90%	B

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	3/5	75-80%	C

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	2/5	70-74%	D

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	1/5	50-69%	F

Overview:

Gameplay

"My First TD" is a tower defense game where you tackle on 35 waves by yourself with towers and upgrades as your tools to win, if all of your life points is gone, you loose the game.

"So after taking my time for this one, I don't feel great about the game, difficulty is too harsh, while your hero 'Jaina' takes most of the damage than your towers plus she takes too long to level up, their are a few misunderstood themes in this map. As for the gameplay I suggest you to nerf up the wave difficulty and balance your hero and tower uses."

Terrain

"All I know about Tower Defense theme is that the map should be clear and plain to prevent the map from lagging, but to see here their are doodads scrambled across the map and it looks spammed, I suggest to either decorate it in a eye-candy way or just remove it, same goes with the tiles."



Management

"To all of my tests you have a lot of leaked triggers, even though I did not open the map but how the output of your codes were executed, their are part where functions duplicate itself which is very bad for a trigger, causing to breed a lot of leaderboards, and waves to spam, work on this by means of reading tutorials, peek at approved tower defense maps to get the idea, and detailing which provides beautification of the map, I couldn't raise up my scores even if this is your first map about TD's but to just say this will be your First Challenge. good luck"






Total Score:

Rate	Score	Percent	Letter
	2/15	57%	F

Status: REJECTED[/COLOR