My first icon :D

[supertoinkz]

Here's my very first icon:
comments and suggestions are needed before submitting

Its kinda blurry on the screenshot

 

[dansaDisco]

Looks very good for a first icon, but it looks noisy and generally unclean.

 

[supertoinkz]

did you ever see the actual file ?
the screenshot is bit noisy coz its bmp

 

[dansaDisco]

Yes I looked on the TGA and its kinda the same thing.

^mine^__^yours^
Compare those 2 icons. I applied a "cheat" filter just to show the difference between a clean icon and a noisy one.

Plus I reccomend a smother glow around the mace, not just a border like it is now.

 

[supertoinkz]

oh, okay tnx
i'll work for it tomorrow after class

 

[breebree123]

looks nice. .has nice shadings, maybe more highlights

 

[supertoinkz]

dansa, that's sharpen right?
And also i remade it

 

[dansaDisco]

dansa, that's sharpen right?
And also i remade it

It's not sharpen, or well, I did a sharpen with 50% fade in the end, but I used a filter I bought before

Though it looks a bit better now, you still got the noisiness, if you got msn or something I can help you reduce it

 

[supertoinkz]

i dont have anthing
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[Spet]

Very nice for a first icon, but dansaDisco is right it is a bit noisy

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Looks great for first one