Made in Classic - WIP - Need feedback pls!

[DaveDave91]

This was made for classic with some reforged assets. It started as a cinematic (wich is exactly what i have right now) but I think this need to be a playable map. I need some ideas with the story and some feedback on the intro cinematic, pls help me make it better!

 

[deepstrasz]

Neat intro. I guess this could be some kind of action survival horror-adventure map/campaign.

 

[Veritas 117]

Incredible attention to detail with the intro. Very well done! I'm not sure there is much more you can do to improve that part. I would suggest working more on the rest of the map. I would love to see what you come up with.