Loyal for Rainbow v1.0a.

[JinJang]

How to get wood?

 

[RayRainT]

How to get wood?

some factions need to build resources building to get wood.

 

[Sapprine]

Ive been waiting for 20 minutes now and it wont fill...

 

[Daffa]

Please provide a better description and some screenshots. Refer to approved maps for reference.

Also, avoid double posting.

 

[RayRainT]

Please provide a better description and some screenshots. Refer to approved maps for reference.

Also, avoid double posting.

so i should edit the map when uploading the new version right

 

[Daffa]

Yes, just use the edit button and upload your new version.

 

[Daffa]

If it's still early beta, I suggest you to use Map Development forum instead. Only late beta and completed maps are allowed in the Map Section.

 

[RayRainT]

If it's still early beta, I suggest you to use Map Development forum instead. Only late beta and completed maps are allowed in the Map Section.

aww sorry i will upload the non beta tomorow. Thankyou for remind me

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Review	Loyal for Rainbow
Key Concept	Altered melee - You put some heroes with spells and names from DotA and put a normal Melee Map layout.
Gameplay	Based on normal melee maps concept. You can choose from multiple races but all of them have like 3-4 units. No race based shops for potions or scrolls. The food production building is also missing. Defensive towers as well. Neutral creeps are really strong. The hero of each faction has 2 spells only? Not enough though, especially when you fight those strong neutral creeps.
Terrain & Aesthetics	The terrain seems fine but some trees are really blocking vision.
Wizardry	Poor spells and not many possibilities to combo them in a fight.
Final Suggestions	Lower the damage and the health of the neutral creeps. Add more structures and units to each faction. Improve your description as well.

As for now, this one should be really improved in the Map Development section. Read the rules before uploading a map.

 

[WhiteFang]

Well,you asked me to play this,so i did so

First,before we get into my findings in the game,i'd recommend working on the description.I recommend a quick overview of mechanics,as this is quite a bit different from normal melee,a quick overview of each race,a short list of features and some screenshots.

ok,I played with 3 races,Azalea Cinderella poison and Golden Spark

I want to start off by saying i like the variety of factions,and how each one has strengths and weaknesses,as well as a role and difficulty.It increases the replay-ability and makes the map more interesting

First issue i had was with the Crawling Chaos hero.His tooltip is not very descriptive,and his abilities are lacking,he is kind of pointless.He has 2 abilities,one of which is attribute bonus,which has no use since he can't attack

My second issue was with the Azalea Council building.It did not have a model,and was completely unselectable,rendering it useless.

Another more minor issue is the upgrade descriptions of the research-able upgrades.Some for example say they increase damage by 9,when they actually increased it by 3


The Orb of annihilation ability of the Drake Rider is called 0Annihilation in the tooltip.Very minor issue,but something i noticed

The gold spark race,think the fact that they can't get lumber except from a production building should be said in description of the race
Also,the production building's lumber production ability has a name that implies that it gives gold,and has the description of the parasite ability

Overall,this map is still very heavy WIP,but its definitely interesting and has plenty of potential

Misc:
I think the creeps are too powerful,they kicked my ass very badly,even with plenty of forces and a hero

 

[konradt]

some more colors for words in the description of races

forgot the name of the faction i picked - it had black citadel; the dark purple color is a bad choice bcs it is hard to read

nice tileset, very colorful

get a native english speaker to check the language

ink image lvlup description is still the same as that of the original skill

best of luck

 

[WhiteFang]

forgot to mention,if you have any questions or need any help,feel free to contact me.I'll do my best

 

[RayRainT]

Updated

 

[WhiteFang]

so what did you change in this new version?

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Provide an update log, please!

 

[RayRainT]

Provide an update log, please!

iam so sorry. I will update it again at night. And add more data change log

so what did you change in this new version?

tavern system so people cant pick same faction. Add informatio each faction. Add information about mechanics, tips, rules

 

[MN Lahmar]

As requested this is my review:

• The general concept of the map is blurred. I would recommend working on a detailed description of the map and its mechanics and a quick overview of the races.
• You can include tips during the game ( When you type the command "-tips" for example).
• Include more spells (custom or modified spells) in your map. A hero having two spells with one of them is attribute bonus is kind of pointless.
• The neutral creeps are too strong (tier 1 creeps are imba )

This project has a lot of potential but it needs a lot of work.
Best of luck and if need any suggestions or help feel free to contact me.

Please avoid double posting. Press on 'Reply' to quote the desired message.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Also, please remove the Aeon of Strife tag since this map is not AoS or Moba.

 

[RayRainT]

As requested this is my review:

• The general concept of the map is blurred. I would recommend working on a detailed description of the map and its mechanics and a quick overview of the races.
• You can include tips during the game ( When you type the command "-tips" for example).
• Include more spells (custom or modified spells) in your map. A hero having two spells with one of them is attribute bonus is kind of pointless.
• The neutral creeps are too strong (tier 1 creeps are imba )

This project has a lot of potential but it needs a lot of work.
Best of luck and if need any suggestions or help feel free to contact me.

Please avoid double posting. Press on 'Reply' to quote the desired message.

iam really really sure on 30 seconds game. There is info to press F9.

It has mechichs. Rules. Tips. But if that lot info still not enough i will add more detail

And the creeps are weak already. I can kill tier 3 creep with 5 units and hero[/QUOTE]