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Layers of Heroism

Submitted by gthkeno
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
In this map you can choose from 8 different characters all with their own abilities and such
You can choose from a Frost mage, toothpick, grounder, Witch "Doctor",Crazy Frog Dude, Medic, Drunken Panda and a Basement Dweller. In this game i made something so you can craft items of your own (The Workshop) it was a new experience for me so you can only make three items. There is a PvP zone and many raids (Raids are indicated by having an exit) One raid is literally impossible without help and a range unit. I give credit to all of those whom made the models and i thank the Hive Workshop for being... Hive.

Keywords:
RPG,Layers,Heroism,hero,gthkeno,orpg,good,death,kill,die,pie
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Layers of Heroism (Map)

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23:02, 13th Jun 2010 ap0calypse: Rejected
  1. 23:02, 13th Jun 2010
    ap0calypse: Rejected
     
  2. -Kobas-

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    Well there is no need for my standard review because map is far from finish...
    But I want from ya to read what I posted in hidden tag below!

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    Greetings gthkeno. The Hive includes many talented Warcraft III modders of all skill levels among its users. New members (especially friendly ones) are always welcome. Take a look around and enjoy your stay, may it be long and productive!

    Some good places to start include:
    Searching the site using the above link always helps, you can learn a lot that way: just reading and learning is usually the best place to start, especially if one feels overwhelmed.

    Likewise, the tutorials can really teach ALL of us a thing or two.
    The chat room is cool: lots of people can answer questions there.

    A few other tips that might help too:
    -Always search first! Did I already mention THAT?
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    -If all else fails, just send me a private message! I'll try to do whatever I can to help.

    I will post some links again and hope you will check and learn something!

    First map description:

    Here check this one: Click and this one also: Click again

    Then about map:
    If map isn't finished jet, use Map Development forum for that! You can make thread there upload your map so people can tell you what they think just like here! Also for any help with triggers or how to clean memory leaks post triggers and create threads here Triggers & Scripts! Btw if you need any help with WE we have World Editor Help Zone here on THW! And at the end if you need any resource from icons to loading screens check this out Requests!

    Now come THW rules:
    Map Rules

    And for the end my rating:
    I will give you 1/5 mark (because I don't like map or map breaks rules) and must vote for rejection (same) and report map to moderator! (to check your map)
    But don't worry, when you finish your map just update this one and ask moderator to unlock it so people can leave comments etc etc!
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    1/5 Vote for Rejection
    Map Reported
     
  3. Tank-Commander

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    I saw this before and from what I can remember - it was rejected, unless ofc by some miracle -kobas- missed it the first time. This is likely a multi-upload.
     
  4. gthkeno

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    i deleted the otherones, if i didnt it would be a multi upload. and if i just update it, it stays rejected and no one bothers to look at it again. i did major changes in stuffs andfixed from what i know every error. so personally i think it should get approved, famous no, fun no (people find something to complain about, its their way of life), but still out there.
     
  5. Tank-Commander

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    You could have contacted a moderator to reset the status to pending, thus it may have been looked at again, so there wasn't really a need to delete the old resource.
     
  6. gthkeno

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    good point, guess im just lazy. ill do that instead
     
  7. Septimus

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    do you know that delete and re-upload are known as multiple upload as well.

    you gotta be kidding me if you expect it to be approve.

    Just look at the horrible way you describe your map, do you think it really meet the min standard of map submission rules?

    and it should be, until you learn to follow the submission rules.
     
  8. Freaky DevA

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    Well.. this map isn't done yet. I tested for a couple of minutes and noticed some grammatical errors, among other things. You also need to add more to your description and maybe a screenshot instead of your mini map. But only after you actually finish the game. You should test it yourself from beginning to end.

    I'll give you an 1/5 only because the triggers seem to work fine.
     
  9. Cweener

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    The description is ugly. Use some of these to help with the ugliness.

    If you'd like some examples of a good description try the following links, and maybe give rep to the authors for being so awesome :)

    Shining Waters by R.Gaming_Strike
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  10. gthkeno

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    I thought it was done. so ill go back and fix the grammar issues and i thank cweener for telling me my problems i would have just done... i dunno. anyway i thank you all for the help you give me and ill go check teh grammar