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11:23, 28th Aug 2013
Orcnet: UndeadImmortal's review

 

[Daffa]

Screenshots please.

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Description is really lacking, even for a template. Describe what you did when you were creating it, what you used, the layout of the map, what it can be used for.

 

[Legal_Ease]

See -> Map Submission Rules
Then read this! BBcode key
Then find one of these.Map Discription Templates Then make a description!


Then read these because they are really cool!
Beginner's Guide to Map Making
Text Colors
Advanced Terraining
Hidden Material
Weapon Attachment
Map Preview Screen
Things GUI users should know
Polishing Your Game
Custom UIs

 

[UndeadImmortal]

• Map has a huge unused spaces.
• You spammed a lot of sea shells which makes it look bad. The shores aren't also smooth, try reading a tutorial about it.
• There are no birds in an oceanic-like area (except for Seagulls).
• The whole map does not have any environmental doodads. Try mixing some doodads to another doodad.
• The map is also have a bumpy terrain, use Smooth tool more often.
• If it's a sunken temple, it should demonstrate a sunken feeling and atmosphere inside. Currently, you just spammed braziers, obelisks, and such.
• As I stated before, try filling those watery part of the map with fitting doodads (Sea weeds, lily pads, ...).
• Try using a fog or a weather to have a little atmospheric feeling.

At the moment, the map is below average for an acceptable terrain. Plus, there's a same terrain here already in Hive. Use the description template stated by Legal_Ease above.

 

[Orcnet]

T-UP from UndeadImmortal's comment.