Islands

[Moderator]

23:49, 16th Aug 2013
Orcnet: not balanced

 

[taavidude]

your first map? i should say that not that bad but i would like to see some screenshots and description is short

 

[The_New_Divide]

"Created by Blizzard Entertainment"

You should write under the Name of Author in the Mapdiscription "Blizzardentertainment/jellybean375", when you have edit the map, like you say it.

 

[UndeadImmortal]

• Hive description is insufficient. Try looking at other's approved maps description, or use one of these tools: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/map-description-generator-1-2-a-224558/ (Requires Java), and http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/.
• Credits for the imported resources are missing.
• The Naga has an imbalance tech-tree, they have a tier-2 and 3 units at start and does not have any building upgrades/tiers. Balance it.
• Mur'gul slaves have a Frost Armor ability (which they don't have any mana for that to use), no attack, and have a Wisp icon.
• The 'Temple of Tides' has a movement speed and can attack at melee range. They also rotate, which makes them look odd.
• Coral Beds produces much more food than the other 3 races.
• The Naga altar only trains 2 heroes and those heroes can be produced infinitely.
• The Undead 'lich king' does not have any model and icon.
• The 'Gilnean Sentural Well' only costs 50 gold, has a build time of 3 seconds, and does not have any pathing requirements. Pretty cheap for a support building.
• The Gilnean altar only trains 3 heroes.
• The 2 gilnean heroes are overpowered, they have 'advanced' skills which you modified and only increased their values.
• Paladin have 5 abilities.
• The worgen peasants becomes human when they activate their Call of Arms ability.

That's all for now, overall, the 2 new races are imbalance compare to the other races.

 

[Legal_Ease]

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[jellybean375]

how do I put in screen shots?

 

[UndeadImmortal]

Press the Print Screen in your keyboard (north of the Insert button and right of the F12 button), then go to an image manipulating program (ex. Paint) and press CTRL + V. Save it as JPG/JPEG or PNG (Full Quality). Upload it here at hive (Pastebin or create an album at your profile then upload the image there) then post the image's url (Link) between the tags [img]IMG URL HERE[/img].

 

[Orcnet]

• Hive description is insufficient. Try looking at other's approved maps description, or use one of these tools: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/map-description-generator-1-2-a-224558/ (Requires Java), and http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/.
• Credits for the imported resources are missing.
• The Naga has an imbalance tech-tree, they have a tier-2 and 3 units at start and does not have any building upgrades/tiers. Balance it.
• Mur'gul slaves have a Frost Armor ability (which they don't have any mana for that to use), no attack, and have a Wisp icon.
• The 'Temple of Tides' has a movement speed and can attack at melee range. They also rotate, which makes them look odd.
• Coral Beds produces much more food than the other 3 races.
• The Naga altar only trains 2 heroes and those heroes can be produced infinitely.
• The Undead 'lich king' does not have any model and icon.
• The 'Gilnean Sentural Well' only costs 50 gold, has a build time of 3 seconds, and does not have any pathing requirements. Pretty cheap for a support building.
• The Gilnean altar only trains 3 heroes.
• The 2 gilnean heroes are overpowered, they have 'advanced' skills which you modified and only increased their values.
• Paladin have 5 abilities.
• The worgen peasants becomes human when they activate their Call of Arms ability.

That's all for now, overall, the 2 new races are imbalance compare to the other races.

Seconded.