human vs orcs!1.2

[Moderator]

15:47, 28th Apr 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Septimus]

how about the 1st tip is to read the submission rules before uploading it?

 

[shadonavan]

what he meens is put a decent description on there. So yeah tell about what kinda gameplay its got not that its your first map

 

[Aesthetics]

- You must give proper credit for each model you use
- This is not appealing at all
- Your description is lacking the required information
- If you are a beginner, please don't risk having yourself go through the trouble of making a map that people will post negative comments on.

And finally, if this doesn't get Rejected, I will ask Ralle to give me a pizza, spam in chat, ban myself, divide by zero, and sprout angel wings while poking a badger with a spoon.

 

[Nikkone]

Well, it looks like you kept to your word as a "beginner", lol.

Anyway, you should fiddle around with worldedit or whatever you're using before you start submitting sources.


*Make sure you use correct grammar and punctuation in your names, etc.
I saw a unit named "alliance luitenant", or something, it was crudely spelled with no caps. Fix things like that, it makes it look unprofessional and sloppy.

*Learn triggers, delete your melee map triggers so you don't get those peons & Great Hall at the start.

*Give credit to the people you took models from.

*Theres no variety, let people select their heroes instead of just giving them something

*Add more player slots.

*Make custom abilities! Giving a blade master with a custom model and avatar won't cut it.

Anyway, I'm going to have to rate this a 1.5 for read some basic guides and learn up.

 

[light bolt30]

Fix up description; credit the peoples models, tell us the gameplay. Add screenshots and a custom preview image if you want to attract more people.

 

[-Kobas-]

For that above you will need this:

BB Code
and
Tutorial

 

[Narrat0r]

n00b description. Fix it or no one downloads it.

 

[jyhv]

ok ty for the tip guys BTW mr peepeeman alliance luitenant?? it´s Lieutenant ? don´t you know what a Lieutenant is ?

 

[Pourquoi]

IMPROVE. THE. DESCRIPTION. How many times did I have to say this ? Map reported.

 

[Aznpride3]

@jyhv he meant to add Capitals to make it look better

 

[ap0calypse]

I can't possibly rate this any higher than 1/5.
The triggers, terrain and objects are all awful, it is clear that you need some more practice in all categories: although most people think that creating custom units is easy, you have failed even there.

I will give you a basic mapping tutorial once you have advanced a little bit, since it's probably still too early for you.
I would suggest that you don't upload maps for quite a while, you miss out basic things like combining triggers with a shared event, variables, memory leaks, tileset, blizzard cliffs, abilities etc.

I do not mean to offend you, I'm just here to tell you how things are in it's current state.

 

[Crave.]

Kays... I think the credits in your description needs some work, so heres an example:

Credits:
QwertyDUDE - Blue Hat Model (loved it!)
SomEGuY - Infantry Icon and Model
nameless222 - Terraining and Triggering (thanks)

Putting them in a list (and using proper english) makes it look more organised and, to a lesser extent, more profesional.

-EDIT-
Why would ANYONE want to sell a flag anyways? Geez they might as well sell the kingdom and get an even more powerful weapon...