House(WithBalcony)

[Moderator]

01:39, 5th Sep 2011
anarchianbedlam: Why is the front door so tall and the 2nd-floor-door so short? why does it just pop up out of the ground? why does it turn to paper origami and fold over when i dies? why are the textures so blurry and stretched looking? this model needs work.

UPDATE: well the proportions look a lot better now. the wall texture on the sides of the house are rather blurred/stretched. And the death and birth animations are pretty ham-handed though. It would have been nice to see some effort in that. but the model itself might be useful as a doodad. its just not... GREAT.

 

[PROXY]

Looks quite good, though, the window at the right side looks quite... strang o.o

 

[Deolrin]

The UV wrap is very bad, and extremely stretched.
I recommend you to work on that.

 

[eubz]

The image makes the UV wrap looks like stretched... I think.

 

[-Grendel]

you can add some additional polies at the house itself to avoid texture stretching

 

[-Grendel]

the build particles still show up in the stand animation. it'll be better too if there is a smoke coming out of the chimney.

 

[xorkatoss]

lol double post

anyway this model seems good...gonna give it 3/5 for now...
how about a stand work animation that smoke comes out of the chimney?

 

[Grunts_Fadora]

dling

 

[Adiktuz]

DP with at least 2 days interval is accepted... haha...

anyway, yeah the textures are stretched... I don't know if its just because of the angle of the pic, but the depth of the house seems to be too shallow...

 

[mobgrip4]

lol that house reminds me of a house that i saw in the getto on my way to

the skatepark of tampa lol nice model tho

 

[eubz]

Model has been updated...
LOOK AT THE IMAGE BELOW...

 

[Orcnet]

"is that a long door in the left and short one in the right?" hmm reminds me of what my teacher tells me in kinder garden during my poopy times.

 

[maddeem]

Lol I love how the door reaches the second window...

 

[-Grendel]

you still have to fix the placement of the windows. and the over stretchyness of the door? on the left side. or is that a window?

 

[eubz]

Lol I love how the door reaches the second window...

That is not a door, its a huge window to enable light to enter inside...

you still have to fix the placement of the windows. and the over stretchyness of the door? on the left side. or is that a window?

A window actually...

 

[Xian]

i love how the door floats a little

 

[eubz]

Updated again:

 

[kellym0]

change the white walls to somthing different and its basicly dun dude,

6.5/10 its nioce!

 

[InfernalTater]

The balcony seems to be made with ashy wood, while the rest of the house uses bright brown wood. Might wanna change some textures. Also the shingles on the section of roof on the left side are much smaller; you may want to change the UV wrap so that they are the same size as the shingles on the rest of the roof.
This certainly looks better than previously, but it still needs more work. For now, 3/5.

 

[jxtranghero]

try to use this texture to make it better https://d27fcql9yjk2c0.cloudfront.net/assets/826773/lightbox/c306fa03c0ddf0c67dec396b628a7338.jpg?1277155551

 

[xorkatoss]

try to use this texture to make it better https://d27fcql9yjk2c0.cloudfront.net/assets/826773/lightbox/c306fa03c0ddf0c67dec396b628a7338.jpg?1277155551

rofl dude, that is soooooo cartoonish xD

 

[InfernalTater]

try to use this texture to make it better https://d27fcql9yjk2c0.cloudfront.net/assets/826773/lightbox/c306fa03c0ddf0c67dec396b628a7338.jpg?1277155551

rofl dude, that is soooooo cartoonish xD

Agreed. The texture already being used looks better.

 

[eubz]

try to use this texture to make it better https://d27fcql9yjk2c0.cloudfront.net/assets/826773/lightbox/c306fa03c0ddf0c67dec396b628a7338.jpg?1277155551

Are those textures already in the .blp format? I guess I have to change the format though...

 

[InfernalTater]

Eubz, you might want to read my comment above, and make those simple changes which I suggested. They should only take a few minutes, but if you want, just ask me and I'll do it for you. This is a very good model with the potential to be extremely useful, however those few flaws really need to be fixed.

 

[RED BARON]

I have used this model as part of a contest submission. Full credit given in map.