Hidden Forest Final

[Moderator]

20:40, 2nd Oct 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Overall quality is too low, please get some tutorials or try a few things out before uploading another map.

 

[Aesthetics]

Testing... (And why is it final when you just posted it today?)

EDIT: Review Below.

Review

Terrain: 1/5 (Unacceptable)
Story: 0/5 (Non Existent) (No storyline at all, hey look, we're a bunch of heroes and we're gonna kill some creeps!)
Gameplay: 1/5 (Unacceptable) (You pick up items, kill creeps, nothing else)
Triggers: 0/5 (Non Existent)

What is this?!

• Melee Initialization
  • Events
    • Map initialization
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 12, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions

• Untitled Trigger 001
  • Events
  • Conditions
  • Actions

• Bounty on
  • Events
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 12, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Player - Turn Gives bounty On for Neutral Hostile

Packaging: 0/5 (Non Existent)(Bad description, bad in-game description, bad loading screen description, no custom UI, no quests or anything, really)
Overall: 1/5 (Unacceptable)

Alright, it's a map with custom models, (WITHOUT the original author's names) edited units, slapped on terrain, and finally, pointless triggers. I suggest you read a few tutorials on The Hive Workshop to improve your skills. You claim this is an RPG map, please define your definition of an RPG. A map takes time to craft correctly, and a map put together in 3 days probably isn't going to be the best it can be.

Approval?

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Not for sensitive people

It sucks badly.

Final Notes: It could be eons better than in its current state, and if you work on it for a decent amount of time with the proper knowledge, you would make a great map.

 

[predador]

You just made it?

Insert more details..

 

[krisserz]

Is it so hard to read and understand rules?

(...) must contain a valid author and map name, and must contain a well-written description to give the reader a good idea of what the map is about(...)

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I wrked on it for 3 days!

Eee... lol?

 

[Aesthetics]

Insert more details..

How's about you insert more text into your quick-reply?

 

[Dj0z]

Ehm... OP, are you serious?...

 

[takakenji]

is this?