Hmmm, sorry, but it doesn't look like it took 50 minutes. It looks more like you changed the colour on somethings, and then added a filter over it. Try doing a little more free hand. I know it's hard, but the end result is worth it. Also, definetly add more shading.
try to look at some good skinners here (saikann, sansui, hueter, and me? :]), maybe you could try to get an overview of what to do and not to do. first, you gotta do a freehand, second, no filters, recolor, cnp, only freehanding would be good for you.
and take your time on your skins, and spend it well, for 50 minutes, thats pretty bad.
u drew lines and used plastic filter (if its called tat in english darn my photoshop ) try freehanding and shading. do it with dodge n burn or try with different levels of colors (a real good friend of mine does that and he makes the most beutifull art, but ok its his job though )
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