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HELL_YA's first Terrian

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I hope you like it! Please comment!
 

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The mountains are very good, I like their shape, but, you should:

- Improve the tilework, more variations.
- We can see the end of the world! Cover that with mountains, trees or just increase the map's size.

Anyway, +
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for the effort.
 
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Yes, indeed. You need to fix your scaling. The people are the size of a whole house. Alot of floating doodads, fix this by clicking on a doodad and pressing CTRL + PAGE DOWN. Bad fog, also. You need alot of practise. The tree variation you chose is quite bad. You should have a sense in which trees fit and which don't. Never scale the water model, instead carefully place a whole lot of them and align them good, to get a nice touch. Some doodads, just look out of place. The underwater doodads don't look very well. Lose the orc walls and scale the grass, its huge.
 
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