Heavy Woods

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Moderator: -Kobas-
Contact: Visitor Message / Private Message!
Date: 09-Jul-13 (22:17:28)

Critical Errors:
-> Map presentation is poor or missing.
-> Your Map has low quality terrain.
Useful Links:
-> The Important Site Rules.
-> You can use Map Development Section for testing and improving your maps.
-> Got any World Editor related questions? Make a thread in the World Editor Help Zone Section
-> The Important Site Tutorials.
-> If you have any complaints or questions about your map, please make a thread here:Map Resource Moderation.
Personal Comment:
-> Terrain quality is low.
Map Status: Rejected

(1/5) Unacceptable

 

[UndeadImmortal]

could any1 tell me how to take and upload screenshots?

Press Print Screen on your keyboard nearly right of the F12 button, then press CTRL + V to Paint (or any other image manipulating programs you have), then go to File -> Save As. After that, go back here in hive and upload the photo (in Pastebin or in one of your albums, just make sure they aren't private). Then update your map by clicking the button at the top, or just post here at the comment section. Post the link of the image then type the following words before and after the link:

.
Example:

[img]http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin_data/fp8y0a/Derp.jpg[/img]

Result

Hope that helps.

 

[WolfFarkas]

hi there, well first of all nice work for a first map
i can see you really put work and time

before begin let me tell you as experience that the first one is the hardest, my first one was rejected so dont be bad if that happen to you, maps are rejected or put in pending every day here in the hive and life continues

my review
good things
-tile mix
-neutral buildings
- imported material

things to improve
1-first of all i advise to make more flat the terrain in the starting location, player blue especial.
2-doodads, you put some water plants but the rest is all empty, i sugest to work that areas so it wont look empty, im talking to add mushrooms, flowers, rocks
3-about the loot system is more easy and confortable if you use random objets per level.
4- there are some creeps that doesnt loot nothing
5- markets unguarded, that is no very orthodox in melee.

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note: i made this with the intention of mark things to fix and improve the map.

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Screeshots bbcodes Generator By Vengeancekael
the two big problems are some parts of the terrain: the hills are to big and there are a lot of empty space

i sugest you to read tutorials, see approved melee maps of the hive or blizzard to gain the touch of what is important in melee

good luck

 

[wolfbite]

hi there, well first of all nice work for a first map
i can see you really put work and time

before begin let me tell you as experience that the first one is the hardest, my first one was rejected so dont be bad if that happen to you, maps are rejected or put in pending every day here in the hive and life continues

my review
good things
-tile mix
-neutral buildings
- imported material

things to improve
1-first of all i advise to make more flat the terrain in the starting location, player blue especial.
2-doodads, you put some water plants but the rest is all empty, i sugest to work that areas so it wont look empty, im talking to add mushrooms, flowers, rocks
3-about the loot system is more easy and confortable if you use random objets per level.
4- there are some creeps that doesnt loot nothing
5- markets unguarded, that is no very orthodox in melee.

the two big problems are some parts of the terrain: the hills are to big and there are a lot of empty space

i sugest you to read tutorials, see approved melee maps of the hive or blizzard to gain the touch of what is important in melee

good luck

thx yeah i released when i went to sleep yesterday that i forgot to add loot to a creep camp and forgot to make one/two at the shop/s

thx for your advice

 

[Legal_Ease]

I will wait for screenshots. Looks pretty nice though. In the mean time, maybe this will help -

Legal_Ease's List of Most Useful Links: Map Submission Rules BBcode key Map Discription Templates Beginner's Guide to Map Making Text Colors Advanced Terraining Hidden Material Weapon Attachment Map Preview Screen Things GUI users should know

@abgm: no screenshots in your review jk

 

[wolfbite]

Press Print Screen on your keyboard nearly right of the F12 button, then press CTRL + V to Paint (or any other image manipulating programs you have), then go to File -> Save As. After that, go back here in hive and upload the photo (in Pastebin or in one of your albums, just make sure they aren't private). Then update your map by clicking the button at the top, or just post here at the comment section. Post the link of the image then type the following words before and after the link:

.
Example:

[img]http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin_data/fp8y0a/Derp.jpg[/img]

Result

Hope that helps.

thx for that, but i don't seem to be able to finish the Ctrl + v part in any way D=

 

[UndeadImmortal]

thx for that, but i don't seem to be able to finish the Ctrl + v part in any way D=

Hmm, just press Right Click then Paste if you're having trouble with that.