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Hate you.

Discussion in 'Sound / Music Art' started by AlotofGarbage, Mar 19, 2007.

  1. AlotofGarbage

    AlotofGarbage

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    Just some lyrics from Whispers of the Beast(got majorly bugged by my friend to do some lyrics)

    Enjoy:Title:Hate you.(I guess Shiftshape did go over the top ><)

    Everyday was always the same,
    How you fooled me,
    How you mocked me,
    Everyday was a waste to me,
    When I saw your face.

    You you Demon you know what you want,
    I hate you,
    You you Demon you know what you want,
    Become a mere memory


    Every breath I took,
    Was another mistake to you,
    How I saw your wicked eyes,
    Stare up at me,
    Your voice still echoes through my ears,
    How you used my insult on me.

    You you Demon you know what you want,
    I HATE YOU,
    You you Demon you know what you want,
    Become a mere memory


    I could feel my temper get the best of me,
    How I wished I killed you,
    How intimidating your voice is,
    How defiling your name is.

    You you Demon you know what you want,
    I HATE YOU
    You you Demon you know what you want,
    Become a mere memory


    I put my trust in you,
    You blew it all away,
    AND FOR WHAT,

    YOU YOU DEMON YOU KNOW WHAT YOU WANT
    I HATE YOU
    YOU YOU DEMON YOU KNOW WHAT
    BECOME A MERE MEMORY


    NOW(x4)

    How I wished,
    The closing of the seal,
    Killed you,
    I hate you Aleihza,
    I want you to become a mere memory,
    In my mind.

    You you Demon you know what you want,
    I HATE YOU
    You you Demon you know what you want,
    Become a mere memory
    (x4)

    Btw the caps isn't emo shouting, its Shift putting real anger into this.
     
  2. DwarfZealot

    DwarfZealot

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    All song writers are like... emotionally damaged or something!
     
  3. Eggy

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    All songs have emotion, only those who LISTEN TO THE MUSIC know what i mean.
     
  4. DwarfZealot

    DwarfZealot

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    Yes... But not all songs have to be about hate, sure they can be about emotions and sometimes even hate, but so far every song posted here has been about death and hate and stuff... it's unhealthy.
     
  5. Kimbo

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    pfft.. You dont want me to post a song then, angst ridden yes.

    Anyway, its good to make songs on emotions, its like me drawing my emotions, its a way of expressing and releasing and..blah blah.

    Emotional songs are good, but they must have meaning, not just "I HATE YOU, YOU SUCk I WANT TO KILL YOU AND U DID SHIT TO ME AND I HATE YOUR EYES. AND I WANNA RAPE YOUR GOD DAM GREEN CORPSE YOU FAGGOT!"

    But something like:

    "I fell today..
    thats when all my life went away

    They laughed at me...
    laughed at me, for my sanity..

    One day i will get them. Their cold black hearts
    One day i will kill them, and tear the apart..."

    dunno..thats all i can think of atm. just an example, Its good, but would touch more people more if it had alittle more err...hidden meaning some people could relate to. Sorry if i didnt explain well, i never was good with writing since i have horrible English skills.
     
  6. AlotofGarbage

    AlotofGarbage

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    Well all songs need an emotion in it don't they? in this case its anger. If I ever finish the Crusade I think you'll know whythe song points to Shiftshape hating Aleihza
     
    Last edited: Mar 20, 2007
  7. Daminon

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    Bah why do we need to hear all this emotion crap in songs and see it in pictures? Just make a dam song/picture.
     
  8. DwarfZealot

    DwarfZealot

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    no as a matter of fact I don't
     
  9. Sephiyr

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    Good piece of work here, but you still need to improve I'm afraid. This is basically like to me ''I HATE YOU! WHY WONT YOU JUST KILL YOURSELF?''. It could be better as this;

    ''Your still beating heart
    It contaminates me
    The scar reminds me
    My tainted past''

    Something like that :).
     
  10. Eggy

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    Your song is good, but after reading it a couple times, your almost Going "In and Out" or "Weaving" thru the subject, like as if you're trying to point something out. Its good i like it. Keeps you intrested.