God War v1.27E4

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» Vengeancekael:[c] 「Profile :: Message :: Hive Staff」

» Date:[c] 「09/Mar/2013 13:06:13」

» Reasons:

Lacking Description: Description Generator (Easy) / Template (Hard)
Please change the suggested players to something more appropriate. (Preferably a number)
Credits to be posted in-game + in the Hive Description. (All authors)​

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» Comment:

Put the screenshots under hidden tags.
Not English.
Missing credits in-game. (Quest log)
"Anti-gay" is offensive.​

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Not Rated

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[Paillan]

that cliffs yust make it look really bad, trees are okey as you don´t spam them to much, but i still recommend you to change their models, verbal errors (i just want to help you out because i have the same problems, but less):
instead of: We are a map maker... this: Map maker group in thailand here.
them delete the other line between that points, it is yust suplus.
apart from that, i would recommend you to use google traslator for words or way of writting you don´t now, we all now it sucks but... better than nothing.
well now from another look:
first delete the gay group, the anti-gay one, and all what is related whit sexuality, since that type of things aren´t permited here in the hive, and also it looks disgusting.
By the sake of [insert name here] make the map in english, it is inentendible.
Terrain really needs a change.
Hero are okey i think.
Overall i give it a 2/5 just becuase of terrain and the gay, anti-gay thingy.