Goblin Wars [Crazy Bomber]

[Moderator]

19:42, 10th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Freeze87]

Sounds good but to much Dota (spells) in this map I will download and check map soon!

 

[Demonwarlord]

Description was a little hard to read, but it does sound sort of interesting, I'll try it now.

Alright, it's...decent, still needs a few changes. I suggest adding 50 health per lvl(little goblin guys level) and making the tome in the shop cost more but give 100 health. I forgot to check to see if the boots stacked but if they do I would try to make it to where they can only have a max of two or three. I also think there needs to be some sort of dumbfire rocket or something. Add a burn effect to the suicide bomber, ranging from slight dmg on the outside to moderate to heavy fire dmg in or near the center. Im also unsure if the stasis traps were supposed to get the goblin bombadiers or not, but I think they should, and speaking of the bombadiers, give them a detonate ability.

T'would be about all I have right now.

 

[E.T.Frost]

Thanks,You gave me a GOOD idea =]

 

[reason 3]

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A nice and unique map idea, i must admit i liked it.Although i have to mention the hero and the spell ideas were taken from "DotA".

[+]Your map file size is small.
[+]Your spells were nice and with really cool special effects.
[+]Your map was protected, so i couldn't look at your triggers but i didn't notice any lag in game even when multiple mines were detonated.
[-]You description is ok..but you should definately remove words like "bitch" from it.Same applies for your Map Info.Try to correct a few typos, too.
[-]The terrain was really boring and badly done.My suggestion would be to re make it, as it is a really nice map.Maybe you could try and build some kind of a maze or labyrinth?
[-]You also have to work more on the game's balance.I think 1 mine should be able to kill enemy bombers so you will have to lower their hitpoints or increase mine's damage.I also think that the cooldowns should be bigger as you can spam mines all the time.
[-]You need more items.An idea would be to make spells require mana, add about 500 mana to your bomber and create items that would regenerate your mana faster.


Overall rating:2/5
Fix description, balance your map and improve terrain and you will probably get this approved.
~ r3

 

[Cweener]

Mass Purging Template Version 4.3
Needs Fix.

Reason for not approving:
Your description needs work before this can even be reviewed, because description is part of the rules.