GermanSoldier.blp

[Moderator]

09:33, 16th Sep 2011
shiiK: The face really looks like crap, but that's partly because of the model. It's a tad dark, especially considering this guy is dressed in camo, and needs to blend in with the terrain. Of course, he can't blend in everywhere, but at least try to reach a middle tone more like the terrain you're aiming for him to hide in. Trousers lack some definition. All-in-all, though, it's really just that head that bugs me. I suggest you fix that before the contest deadline. Let me know when you do, and test it in-game when you have.

(Edit (12:22, 16th Sep 2011), shiiK: I thought I already put this in Needs Fix.)

 

[HOooDy]

AwSomE ! Keep it up !

 

[D a w n]

eyes look creepy. they could really need some improvements

 

[DaHomieG]

Looks great, only 2 things wrong here: his head is really huge. Scale it down a bit. He looks like a bobble-head. And as Don said, his eyes stare into my soul.

 

[D a w n]

Looks great, only 2 things wrong here: his head is really huge. Scale it down a bit. He looks like a bobble-head. And as Don said, his eyes stare into my soul.

he cant fix the head. He just edited to texture of a model. If somebody'd have to fix the head it would be Fingolfin

 

[Black-kitty]

Good job, love it!

 

[Tleno]

Eyes are creepyly bright, you should darken them and immprove them slightly to look less weird...

 

[Kazzo]

I didn't work to much on eyes because they aren't not noticable ingame thanks to the facewrap and the helmet.
But i can give it a quick update,thanks for the comments Btw.

 

[Fingolfin]

he cant fix the head. He just edited to texture of a model. If somebody'd have to fix the head it would be Fingolfin

Yeah, sorry, the proportions of this model are a mess.

Some advice on the eyes though: the separate round part is actually the entire pupil, you shouldn't have white stuff in it as that is why he is looking like a zombie.

 

[IronTaker56]

Its too awesome 5/5!

 

[Kazzo]

Added new eyes,enjoy.

 

[DaHomieG]

Yeah forgot it's a skin. :s But sweet they look great now 5/5 and +rep good sir.

 

[RiotZ]

The eyes are hella creepy, and the texture itself is way too dark; you won't be able to see it well enough in-game in my opinion.

On another note it looks like everyone is reskinning Fingolfin's models for this contest lol.

 

[Fingolfin]

I know, most awesome contest ever!

 

[Kazzo]

I tryed to Ligth the camo,but gets a bit messy.
I prefer to leave him as it is now.

For those asking here's the tutorial for doing camo's,very easy way
http://biorust.com/index.php?page=tutorial_detail&tutid=42
Maybe i upload a attached blp file with a Urban warfare Camo.

 

[Tleno]

Okay, I guess eyes look better now...

 

[MiniMage]

Since the original models head is too big. The skin looks kinda cartoony because of it. XD

 

[darkdeathknight]

Why not try and do a desert camo. If theres still time that is. It would be more 'American'

 

[Tleno]

Actually it's pretty fine as it is now.. sure not exactly the most american camo there can be... still I think it's only a benefit - it can be used not only as Asmerican, but as any other kind of trooper, too.

 

[Kazzo]

I'm working on a winterized camo and on a Urban camo.
Will drop it here soon attached to my post.

 

[darkdeathknight]

Actually it's pretty fine as it is now.. sure not exactly the most american camo there can be... still I think it's only a benefit - it can be used not only as Asmerican, but as any other kind of trooper, too.

Well I guess that's true.

 

[Tleno]

Still more variations are always welcome!