Kyo said:
Witnessing that one of the three team's eggs had already hatched,
Actually, all Three eggs have hatched now. Team T.H.U.M.P.E.R.'s egg hatched
first,
second came Team Maniac's egg, and
finally team McPatrickus' egg hatched as well.
Kyo said:
"That reminds me, I kinda miss my Pikachu..."
The World of Kaelicious is supposed to be completely unique, and hold as Little direct influences from other fictional universes as possible. That's why we changed the name of Pandarens to Pandas, and changed location of Santa's Workshop from the North Pole to the Valley of Christmas, etc. Saying that Pikachus and other Pokemon exist in this World is kinda ruining the whole thing, so please leave that out. Besides, since when did Kyousuke become a Pokemon Trainer? Or is it a weird refference to Bern?
Kyo said:
There he found the butler and the members of McPatrickus team, staring at the bread-man in front of them.
This conflicts with previous posts. The very post Before yours, by Paillan, reveals that Team McPatrickus had been hiding near Mt. Millennium from the chicken monster that recently hatched from their own egg, and now they are arriving at the same Place where Am'ar is fighting Kyrkow, and Leila is fighting the Flamiken. So you should somehow connect these events, if your post is to Count as actual lore
