Gate to the city

[Oziris]

Ok this is my first terrain i made it for some 15-20 min and i dident finish it becous it was boring.And i dident give all that i have ^^

http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledwr1.jpg
http://img293.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled111qv5.jpg
http://img453.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled11rd0.jpg

 

[demonsofdante]

WHy would you put up a terrain to showcase if it only took you 20 minutes and you didnt try your best?

 

[Craka_J]

I too wonder why you'd want to show off stuff that isn't even your best.
However so far it isn't that bad. Needs a ton of work in all aspects of terraining: Needs a good matching fog, needs environment, needs better atmosphere, needs a sky, needs smooth hill variation, needs better tile-variation, etc.
Please try your best and show us the out-come when you're done. Then we'll be able to give more specific advice and tips.
~Craka_J

 

[Gilles]

People post WIPs, but don't post unless you actually tried on it. The only case where you would post work when you put no effort in would be if you think it turned out OK.

As Craka said, it's not bad, too empty though. Needs more, or need to be smaller. There's just too much empty space.

 

[demonsofdante]

I think people say such things so they can be like "oh it only took me so and so minutes, its not my best" if they were to recieve negative criticism.

 

[Gilles]

I agree, but I try not to judge unless there is glaring evidence.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Doing your best is overrated.

 

[Oziris]

Hear are my updates and i dident know what to do i know it is emty i dident know what to put in thos spaces so u can see now that i puted a Fog and Rain and i Changed the water put some more doodads and u will see more:
http://img72.imageshack.us/my.php?image=update1lb2.jpg
trees flowers and more..
http://img256.imageshack.us/my.php?image=update11xr9.jpg
This is wher units sleep and u will see i added some picture chairs tables..
http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=update111fv7.jpg
flowers and grass ...
http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=update1111qj7.jpg
hear is some error but u can see the picture
http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=update11111qo3.jpg
and hear is an error but its ok
I will see more mybe i add some stuff ...or mybe not..

 

[Gilles]

Much much better. The angles at which the screenshots are taken helps big time. Overall a good improvement.
+REP for good improvement.

 

[4rankie]

Thats really good man, but whats with the people hiding with the tables lol, do they think there safe?


~4rankie~

 

[Oziris]

The people with the tables are fighting (war) so the guards are standing and saying stop u are going to die if u move ..Hehe..