My First Terrian

[Gallin]

well this is my first terrian and i want to know what you think is good and bad about it and yes i do know i used all one tile im waiting for more so dont talk about that


















*edit added another picture

 

[~Void~]

Well the doodad placement is decent. But honestly I don't consider this a terrain, it's really just a bunch of building models on nothing.

What about plants? What about different tiles? What about craters or something if it's ruined? What about fires or smoke? What about dead bodies or debris? What about a background? What about height? What about fog and sky?

 

[Gallin]

i do have a fog in and what are you talking about sky?

 

[Hawkwing]

The fog is black, it should be.. A gray.

You need some tile variation like Dirt, Grassy Dirt, and such. Try some height variety as well. The camera angles aren't great either.

 

[Gallin]

another picture with a street

 

[Hawkwing]

Well the plants look a bit unatural.. Out of place..

Again you need terrain variation. The road is good but the dirt needs to be changed up.

 

[Belgarath]

If it's a sort of Iraqi, desert terrain, you should add in a orange or brown fog.
(Brown: Use dark red and half the 2nd value put 0 for the 3rd)

It's pretty average. You need more tile variation - I think barrens or village is the best fit for this, maybe village fall. The plants need to be tinted accordingly to match the ground tiles and the doodads, so I'd suggest a reddish gray.

 

[Gallin]

added some grassy dirt some craters and a densier gray fog

 

[Hawkwing]

The craters are a bit too deep considering it is on a road, the grassy dirt should be off to the side of the road. The camera angle could use some work still and the front of the screenie needs some attention.

 

[Gallin]

well the grassy dirt is on the road because of cracks in the road grass came here and after a time it became more and more

 

[Gilles]

Looks pretty good so far. I suggest importing plants or using tinted river rushes. Too many shrubs right now.

 

[Gallin]

well i dont really want to use too many custom models its still got to be playable im also trying to find a destroyed car to put on the roads

 

[Hawkwing]

Please don't use imageshack it is painful.

Just click "Go Advanced" unless you are already there and go "Add attatchments".. PLEASE

 

[Gallin]

well thats not working too well in the past for me but ill try it


* not working keep getting error uploaded new image of a different area

 

[Belgarath]

Lots better now. You should add different plants too.

 

[Gallin]

i tihnki maight add a subway but i dont no how to do this like which tiles

 

[seruk]

Terrain, dude. Terrain.