Forest Transylvania v2.1

[Moderator]

22:30, 6th Dec 2012
Orcnet: see Radicool's Review

 

[Radicool]

I like the idea of a scary/thriller map, however there is room for imporvement.

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  There is a problem with the music. Human music was playing on top of the scary music. Need to fix that.

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  There are missing DISBTN icons for your custom icons. It makes the icons go green in some cases. Heres a picture:
  DISBTN

  

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  Descriptions are missing! Items, abilities and buildings are missing a description, or show blank. Please provide a description to say what the item does, what it is, etc.

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  Apparently the objective is to last 15 minutes. I would really like to have a countdown timer in the game, to let everybody know how long is left.

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  A lot of the text in the game is messy. The grammer is off. I suggest you read over things like in the quest menu and text messages that pop up and improve the grammer.

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  If the survivors are weak, it seems odd that the survivors get items with damage. Are they suppose to kill the killer? I only played single player so im not entirely sure.

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  I hope to see some more buildings in future updates. There seems to be lacking ways to add interest into the game. Items and 1 building seems a bit shallow.

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  Work on the atmosphere a bit. For a scary game, the environemnt doesn't appear very scary. Set it in night time. Add triggers to change between foggy weather, rainy weather, etc. Lightning, ambient wolves howling, and scary bats, etc.

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  You don't need to add warning about gore and disallowing it for people with heart disease. It sounds a bit silly.

Hope you work on the points I mentioned. Its a lot, but the more feedback you get, the better.

 

[spellcastle]

I like the idea of a scary/thriller map, however there is room for imporvement.

• 
  There is a problem with the music. Human music was playing on top of the scary music. Need to fix that.

• 
  There are missing DISBTN icons for your custom icons. It makes the icons go green in some cases. Heres a picture:
  DISBTN

  

  [/

• 
  Descriptions are missing! Items, abilities and buildings are missing a description, or show blank. Please provide a description to say what the item does, what it is, etc.

• 
  Apparently the objective is to last 15 minutes. I would really like to have a countdown timer in the game, to let everybody know how long is left.

• 
  A lot of the text in the game is messy. The grammer is off. I suggest you read over things like in the quest menu and text messages that pop up and improve the grammer.

• 
  If the survivors are weak, it seems odd that the survivors get items with damage. Are they suppose to kill the killer? I only played single player so im not entirely sure.

• 
  I hope to see some more buildings in future updates. There seems to be lacking ways to add interest into the game. Items and 1 building seems a bit shallow.

• 
  Work on the atmosphere a bit. For a scary game, the environemnt doesn't appear very scary. Set it in night time. Add triggers to change between foggy weather, rainy weather, etc. Lightning, ambient wolves howling, and scary bats, etc.

• 
  You don't need to add warning about gore and disallowing it for people with heart disease. It sounds a bit silly.

Hope you work on the points I mentioned. Its a lot, but the more feedback you get, the better.

Thanks for your report Radicool ..

I appreciate that!

I will fix my map soon.

 

[spellcastle]

Actually .. you can find item in that map : Axe
Armor
Helmet
Boot
Torch
Medic kit

... keep searching

 

[Radicool]

Im aware you can find some items in the map. The point I was making was about there being limited options in the game. You roam around for 15 minutes, but doing what? There is not much you can do in the game other than build camp fires and search for items. There needs to be more in the map to do.

Also, your avoiding the killer, however the axe gives you damage. That is a contradiction of the idea of running from a Killer. What is damage for? Also, be careful introducing combat into a thriller game. A warcraft 3 fight is hardly scary. Its all about building suspense. Again, I'm not sure how to make a game of running interesting unless you really make the game really scary. Maybe some people can post some suggestions.

 

[spellcastle]

if really scary , i also dont want play haha

 

[UndeadImmortal]

Are you sure this is your map?

 

[spellcastle]

why you asked that question?

not only icefrog can create map .. i also can cr8 my own map..

not impossible

 

[sonofjay]

Nope he just means that there is too much copy cat of Transylvania type of map that its hard to discover if the one you're looking at are original or what.

 

[spellcastle]

Yes this one is original by me and not from stealing other map.

 

[UndeadImmortal]

why you asked that question?

not only icefrog can create map .. i also can cr8 my own map..

not impossible

Offtopic: I know, i'm a map maker also...

 

[Radicool]

Offtopic: I know, i'm a map maker also...

Lol, so am I

 

[spellcastle]

So am i ^^

 

[spellcastle]

why reject?

pls give me information about "can cause error" ..

Let me know what the error so i can fix ASAP

 

[Orcnet]

I am about to make up a review, but to see a similarity with Radicool's rating just look up in his comment and do it, good luck

 

[spellcastle]

-human music ? you should turn off of MENU>OPTION>SOUND>turn off music.

-missing icon alrdy fixed .. the icon will missing if you playing single player.

-discription alrdy fixed.

-game time alrdy fixed.

-grammer? of course , im not from US ^^

-survivor not weak also the killer . They need to get weapon before the killer kill survivor or survivor kill killer.

-i dont want make many building. this game survival not stratergy.

-atmosphere alrdy fixed.

-warning? alrdy fixed.

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Wait v1.13 .. I will fix the problem that you not found like /\ there..
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[spellcastle]

Thanks you for reporting problem,bug and other..

 

[spellcastle]

how bout now ?

 

[spellcastle]

i cant fix disbtn iconn .. because it's ability .. not item =.=" ..

 

[spellcastle]

Fixed