Footman.BLP

[Moderator]

14:05, 20th Jun 2009
Hawkwing: It's very cartoony. Any shadows you have made are thick black lines. Also, there is too much scale mail and, due to your poor shading, simply decreasing the amount wont solve your issues. They are way too defined, which is - again - a result of your poor shading.

 

[Dentothor]

it looks very messy and undefined. it doesn't look like chainmail either. it lacks shading and definition. this skin needs a whole lot of work.

2/5 LACKING

 

[tigherion]

it doesn't look like chainmail either/QUOTE]
It souden't look like it becouse it's scalemale

 

[Dentothor]

either way... it still lacks proper shading to be "scalemail"

 

[tigherion]

Updated it to version 1.1

 

[Dentothor]

still looks very messy and too much recolour...

Must Be At least 75% freehand. Only 25% of the skin may be recolour and/or copy and paste.

way more than 25% buddy

 

[Misha]

what the heck? there is soo little edit here, some bland recolor that is rust look-alike,
chainmail doesn't look like it, the details on helm look like MSpaint.

you need to work on it a lot, lot more. and also check our skining tutorials here on hive

Rating: 2.45/5 Lacking

~Misha~

 

[Xezko]

a scale helmet with golden borderds??
thats look a lil weird.

 

[Misha]

well.. this is only my opinion, but the chainmail looks like some small pebbles CnP to me =?

 

[ipwnnn00bs4life]

If you where to make it chainmail you would need to make the circles more smallers just look up chainmail armor and you will see what i mean.

 

[Xezko]

if that are chainmail, Im Ricky Martin.

 

[Avex]

Learn to read people, its SCALEmail.

 

[Xezko]

i still thinking that a scalemail helmet is weird. Rofl.

 

[Misha]

that's a pebble-mail

 

[Lokeen]

what is up with the blue hair its a manga with scale mail........wierd

 

[Dentothor]

its just more recolour tigherion... its not helping the skin to be approved whatsoever

 

[Xezko]

OMG! this footman had drunked some radioactive acid!! lol
Fix the colorscheme, for the love of God.

 

[Misha]

are you kiddin' me? this way it won't get aproved in milion years.
get the hair to some normal color and do more work on detailing.

 

[Xezko]

not million, billion.

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You need to:
Fix the colorscheme
Fix the freehand
add more freehand
add shading
add highlights
get out some recolor and make more freehand
fix the whole skin look
etc,etc.

 

[tigherion]

What blue hair ?

 

[tigherion]

It's hair is white... if you wonder why go ask your granny why she has white hair.

Update it to version 1.3

 

[Xezko]

thats cant be white.
Also, you make a double post.
You are drive me crazy.
And my granny is dead.

 

[Dentothor]

1. Dont double post use the edit function
2. and yes, by recolouring the skin you made the hair blue and very weird.


Personally i think you should start over on this and try a different concept because it looks very messy and it still does not pertain to the rules of skinning.

EDIT: Damn Xezko got it first

 

[Xezko]

you cant against my dexterity xD
and yes, i say that he need to start over this skin.

 

[Misha]

~rated as pending to rejection~

you have 10 days to get rid of the "pebbles" and that weird blue hair.

and helm could be a lill different too =/

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

~rated as pending to rejection~

you have 10 days

Since when did you become a mod?

You didn't

Oh yeah....

 

[Xezko]

OMG! the Misha's ego is goin to the space! xD

...

Its supposed to tigherion fix this someday? :S

 

[krisserz]

For me it looks kinda like a snake

 

[Sabelion]

Helmet looks good to me , rest.....not so good.

 

[Misha]

Since when did you become a mod?

You didn't

Oh yeah....

"rated as"? Xer.

OMG! the Misha's ego is goin to the space! xD

...

Its supposed to tigherion fix this someday? :S

For your info...... i did that to hurry the guy into actually doin' something.
i am not a mod, but a critiquer. and i'm pretty much sure the real mods would give him much, much less time, so i'm actually horribly nice to the guy >)

 

[X.e.r.e.X]

But don't act like a mod. (Telling when it's supposed to be fixed etc)
It might confuse new members + It's just annoying.

 

[Misha]

hmm....... alright

but he still should fix that as soon as possible >_>

 

[tigherion]

Updated it to version 1.4

 

[Dentothor]

its still mostly recolour and it still looks awful

 

[Xezko]

There is only one word that describes the thing that i'm feeling now of this thread:
FACEPALM.
Seriously, Skin is serious bussines.
So, try to get more freehand here and fix all the errors or my head will explode! xD

 

[N.O]

Unique idea... 3.2/5=6.4/10 so gj n ima use this texture in my map.

 

[Xezko]

[OFFTOPIC]

Unique idea... 3.2/5=6.4/10 so gj n ima use this texture in my map.

WTF? was that sarcasm? or what?
[/OFFTOPIC]

 

[Dentothor]

i agree... you really must be out of your right mind to use this skin

 

[Vulcano]

its like there is a chicken smashed on his helmed 2/5

 

[punwisp]

So.. Instead of constantly insulting him, why not just list things to improve? At this rate he won't even touch the skin because of you guys throwing so many insults at him.

 

[Dentothor]

So.. Instead of constantly insulting him, why not just list things to improve? At this rate he won't even touch the skin because of you guys throwing so many insults at him.

aas i had said before, he has completley ruined it and therefore can hardly impove on it. meaning he should start over.

 

[ike_ike]

Half the people insulting this skin aren't even remotely good enough to act the way they're acting towards it.

It isn't even that bad, considering. The scale mail won't be viewed from close up anyhow, and it looks pretty cool from regular distance. The teamcoloured areas are a bit too flat, and I'm not quite sure what the orange blobs on his legs are, though. If you don't keep repeating that scale mail and try some different leather armour types on the shoulders and chest, I could see this being approved. Which is more than could be said for most of the people in this thread.