FL orchestra!

[Nailgun]

Yea, im certainly no visual artist, but when it comes to music, im WAY better.
This is something that I made a few weeks back in FL. It's my best.
When I made it, I tried to make it like something that could be shown in a movie. It has fast parts, slow parts, and what I hope is a climax. Enjoy, hope you like it.
I may delete the attachment soon because its big, so if I do heres the link to it on my Windows Live Skydrive:
Just click the download when you get there.
EDIT: Oops, uploaded the shitty version that I was testing with.
Rendering the real version now.
Ok. Sorry, It might not work. Ever since I got that new FL Beta its been acting really wierd...

 

[Nestharus]

Not bad = ).
Personally, I still think this needs a lot of work. The ending doesn't sound quite right either =).

Ok, so here are my suggestions : D.

Transition from the introductory phrase into melody A-
This is actually done pretty nicely in my opinion with the good introduction of the main rhythm and then right into the main melody.

Melody A-
Repeats twice with slight variation, which is well down

Transition from A to B-
This transition def needs some work. When we head into melody B, the fast part, it just doesn't flow right =). Seems rough. Also, this transition seems like a mirror image of the melody that was just heard, so maybe embellishing the rhythm here wouldn't hurt =), a slight theme variation and gradual speed up to prepare us for melody B.

Melody B-
The stat of melody B is another transition that is repeated twice, so it goes from Transition to Transition, to yet another transition. At this point, the piece starts feeling like blocks in a puzzle that seem arbitrarily placed and don't really fit well together. The piece starts to fall apart =).

Melody B to Melody C-
No real transition as Melody B is like a series of transitions. The start of melody C sounds like another build up for something, like another transition, and it flows beautifully back into Melody A, but where was the actual melody of C? : ).

Melody A #2-
Done well

Ending-
Def needs work and seems abrupt ^_^.


So, short notes-
Less appetizers and more courses : p.

 

[takakenji]

i like it, seems very lotr-like too (that's a good thing, lotr was pretty awesome)

 

[Virus_X]

I suggest you download a VSTi Called Colossus, from Native Instruments.

As for the music i'd give you a 3/5, and i suggest you don't end it with a cymbal ^_^.

 

[Mulgrim]

the piano on this is beautiful, please make more with piano.