First Terrain : What do you think ?

[Geoffroy77]

Hi !
Here is my first terrain making =).
What do you think of it ?
It's the Capture of Illidan in a train =)

 

[~Void~]

Why are you showing the end of the map? Also, the sky you use and those rays of light don't make sense. If the sun is right there, why are the rays coming from above the sun? And furthermore, why is it raining?

 

[raid1000]

thats something new ^^

 

[thegreatsmite]

looks pretty bad and illogical if you ask me, try looking at other terrainers' stuff to get an idea.

 

[Belgarath]

You do know how rainbows are formed right void?
Remove the rays, make it less at the end of the map, add some trees yadayada

 

[~Void~]

Do you know how babies are formed, Belgarath? It may be naturally possible but it sure as hell doesn't look good in a terrain.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Why not improve the concept you are trying to portray lol

 

[Handycombinder]

Ive never seen anything like this before

 

[Geoffroy77]

What do you think of that new screen ?

 

[Lancer1111]

nice idea with the train

 

[Handycombinder]

I agree with Lancer but there is still coming lights from above while there is a sun at the other side

 

[Lancer1111]

yeah the sky and light are not just as how the terrain and tendency

 

[Grave_Digger_]

It looks like you would just fall down for ever if you go to the other side of the way where illidan is. And some of the trees looks like there floating, cause the stem are barely touching the ground. Use ctrl + pagedown / ctrl + pageup to lower / higher the doodads. As said before also remove rays of light cause the sun is in the middle of the background and not on top of it.

 

[BearMan]

I can see a lot of potential in this terrain, and if you start looking at other terrains you can get some ideas, or why not a tutorial. Your terrain is good in my opinion.

 

[Megafyr]

I like the train and I think than was made pretty well for a first terrain. However the light effects don't make sense.Try next time to use custom light effect doodads from UTM istead of using blizzard weather, that will make it look much better. And try to have more distance in your landscape. Keep terraining, you got it, just practise. : )