First Skin :P

[aki15]

Hello everyone, i started skinning and i need your help.
ShiiK told me to post my skin here.
I'm working on savage man now :

Skin

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Updated, used Mr.Goblins Tutorial for leather !
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Updated Again !

 

[takakenji]

im not a skinner but that body is really blurry and low detail and it dosnt match the head at all

 

[-Grendel]

i agree the abs are really low and the chest muscles are small.

 

[-Peper-]

And the muscles looks so unreal.
No, it's just me. The Warcraft 3 skins in cartoonal lol.

 

[aki15]

Yup, it's blurry when u zoom it...

 

[Tamerleine]

is that his pants? or is it hair

 

[aki15]

Something like pants !

 

[Deleted member 157129]

The pants, or shorts, or hair.. or whatever it is, it lacks the part that goes around his waist. He's only got clothes on his thighs, and believe me, you do want to cover up his crotch. He would want that too, even if he's as savage as they come.

The muscles are quite poorly shaded, and they are also misplaced. I suggest you use some references to help you place the muscles right.

Reference Pictures

Body of buff human, front

Body of buff human, back

Body of average human, front and back with names

Finally, Mr.Goblin offers a lot of help on how to make textures, and various materials in his tutorial here.

 

[aki15]

Spoiler

[rainbow]I updated screenshots, hope it's little better now ?[/rainbow]

 

[Deleted member 157129]

It actually looks more like fur than leather, but either way, what it really lacks, is shape. You need to make it look like cloth. It should have a defined edge, and it should have something to hold it up, like a belt. I also think you should pull those shorts further up.

 

[aki15]

It actually looks more like fur than leather, but either way, what it really lacks, is shape. You need to make it look like cloth. It should have a defined edge, and it should have something to hold it up, like a belt. I also think you should pull those shorts further up.

[rainbow]I updated it again ![/rainbow]

 

[Tamerleine]

Is that blood?
if it is,try Making it more realistic...

 

[chilla_killa]

I tried the same thing a few months ago and I failed, too
It's a bit difficult to get the right shape of muscles and shade it right.
But it's also because of the messy wrapping of the model -.-
Good Luck on improving it

 

[aki15]

I tried the same thing a few months ago and I failed, too
It's a bit difficult to get the right shape of muscles and shade it right.
But it's also because of the messy wrapping of the model -.-
Good Luck on improving it

Thanks !