Fireball Clap V1.0

[Moderator]

16:23, 15th Nov 2009
TriggerHappy187:

• You need an ingame screenshot.
• Waits suck.
• You leak a lot.
• Your using the wrong event (Unit - starts the effect of ability is the correct one).
• Aim variable is completely useless.

 

[SonicFrenzy]

the screenshot is not promising but plz download and then rate. youll see its awesome

 

[Santa_Claus.]

1. Find a better screen shot
2. Make a custom Spell instead of using thunder clap
3. why your spell don't work ingame
4. trigger is kinda horrible
5. find a better map name
6. Use triggering unit instead of casting unit

Edit:
7. even if it don't work , it leak -.-
8.

• Actions
  • Set Aim = (Facing of (Casting unit))
  • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 12, do (Actions)
    • Loop - Actions
      • Set Aim = 30.00

you set Aim and you reset Aim for a different thing , the first value of Aim will disapear and its kinda useless -.-

 

[kola]

hmm.. trigger is rly rly too simple.. but i'll still say u waht to fix so u can improve ur triggering skills..

you leak a points :

• Unit - Create 1 for (Owner of (Casting unit)) at (Position of (Casting unit)) facing Aim degrees

• Unit - Order (Last created unit) to Undead Dreadlord - Carrion Swarm ((Position of (Casting unit)) offset by 256.00 towards Aim degrees)

you have to set the point in a variable before and u have to remove it after, using a custom script... u have to write in the custom script action : call RemoveLocation(udg_Variable_Name) to remove it

U use an Integer A but u do nothing with it...
This is totaly useless

• Set Aim = 30.00

to make the Integer A do something u have to do this

• Set Aim = (30.00 x (Real((Integer A))))

Using an integer A isnt the best thing to do cuz it can bug but at the triggering point u are just continue with it..
use Triggering Unit instead of Casting unit. (Triggering Unit works for the unit that is in the event)

Also i would suggest u to remove the wait 0.50 sec for a better effect and ability.

 

[redscores]

Horrible, get some GUI tutorials and learn.

 

[BloodSoul]

What the hell are you doing?
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• Unit - Create 1 for (Owner of (Casting unit)) at (Position of (Casting unit)) facing Aim degrees

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Where is the unit type to create? and there are alot of LEAKS.
You wanna try to make/copy a circle of carrion swarm?

 

[Ice Snake]

more screenshot ??

 

[SonicFrenzy]

i know its horrible but plz gimme a chance, i am completely noob in skinning and in makin spells and i promise ill se the tutorials.