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Fear Chamber

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
i have been playing dota for some time with all the heroes and all the items and i got bored with the same heroes and items every time so i decided to make my own dota with new heroes and new items so players can enjoy dota but with new stuff in it.I didnt made this map to be better that the real one and i dont say it is.

PS.i know that many of the triggers can be much smaller by using varables but i dont know how to.So i made a dota map without using variables.

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dota,hero defence,rpg,
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Fear Chamber (Map)

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19:38, 21st May 2009 by bounty hunter2: Septimus is quite clear, Rejected.

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19:38, 21st May 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Septimus is quite clear, Rejected.
 
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1) Description - Lack of proper description about this map. All we know about this map was just another dota copy.

The same goes into the map as well without a proper quest log.

2) Scripting/Triggering - Poorly done, full of memory leak and ineffective. It leak location, special effect and etc etc.

3) Terrain - Poorly develop with lack of destructible/doodad usage and tiles variation. Infact, the entire terrain was flat with 1 type of destructible.

4) Tooltips/Hotkey - Lot's of hotkey doesn't show, invalid or clash, even the tooltips isn't properly done.

From what I seen, this isn't beta stage map; but alpha stage.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

Please read more tutorial before you make any map in the future.
 
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im sorry but i dissagree, the hotkeys are all working properly and as for the terrain i think its good,not extremely super cool and not the worst ever.As for the triggers i think that the mapmaker deserve a compiment because its a miracle that he managed to made recipes,modes,kills and etc.etc without using any variables or anything except gui triggers.it shure needs some work but for now its 3/5 :nemor:
 
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i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor and to watch the triggers and a whole onther thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun.ofc if the only thing you saw was the not excelent trgiggers you will think its 1/5 but if you play it and have fun you will think its 4/5 or 5/5.

i say 4/5(realy good allthoug it needs some work)
 
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i agree with gert123 and pyromancer the map is fun.i most like the mact that everything is made only with GUI triggers and the fact that the mapmaker has tried to use the normal spells as little as posible 4/5
 
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the hotkeys are all working properly

Needless to said more? This is just a few.

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As for the triggers i think that the mapmaker deserve a compiment because its a miracle that he managed to made recipes,modes,kills and etc.etc without using any variables or anything except gui triggers.

Terrible coding isn't something to be proud about.

but for now its 3/5

If such a map deserve 3/5, all approve map deserve 6/5.
If you think this map deserve 3/5, why don't you ask all those staff and map reviewer team to review it. I guarantee their answer would be exactly like mine.
 
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i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor or singleplayer and to watch the mistakes of the mapmaker a whole other thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun than you will have a different apinion of the map.
 
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terrain is very bad. the spells is not fun for a aos. I mean if u play an RPG its ok with normal spells. But this is an aos need triggered spells to be fun. But overall 2/5. if im nice 2.5/5 u need to do sumthing more but it has potential work harder on it and post it later when u have improved it. Ask some one for help with variables etc.
 
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i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor or singleplayer and to watch the mistakes of the mapmaker a whole other thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun than you will have a different apinion of the map.

What's the point of hosting a map with terrible coding that leak heavily? It would just cause a serious lag later on.

It don't even have a decent hotkey setup at all just like you claim.

Hotkey must be shown at tooltips, it must work and it must not clash with other hotkey. That is what we call a proper hotkey.
 
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wtf i cant come to the second topic LOL. Septmus pls solve this out maps is black ets xD.
And septimus is right about this. This map need alot of work. And i think i can help u with some parts. And i hope u get a very good coder to fix the memory leaks and the stuff. Would be great if some one helped u with the codes :D

I checked ur map again more detailed. Dude its horrible. U need to fix alot the creeps goes wrong. And some times i cant buy items. Its alot that needs to fix. it feels like u made this haras and u wanted ur map up. I think its good to remake the map. THe creeps in the forests looks wird. Its not like an AoS. U need to fix alot. I mean the heroes are so boring. And when i try to kil la creep it takes 1 min. And some times when the creeps coming = the creep spawn. It takes to long time so i got to w8 like 20-30 sec for next wave i mean LMAO. Ok i can help u making better terrain and do some cooler heroes. But u need some one to fix ur triggers and stuff. Send me an pm with ur msn :) But i like ur minimap its awesome :D u could do it cooler tough i can do that for you if u want :p
 
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wtf i cant come to the second topic LOL. Septmus pls solve this out maps is black ets xD.
And septimus is right about this. This map need alot of work. And i think i can help u with some parts. And i hope u get a very good coder to fix the memory leaks and the stuff. Would be great if some one helped u with the codes :D

I checked ur map again more detailed. Dude its horrible. U need to fix alot the creeps goes wrong. And some times i cant buy items. Its alot that needs to fix. it feels like u made this haras and u wanted ur map up. I think its good to remake the map. THe creeps in the forests looks wird. Its not like an AoS. U need to fix alot. I mean the heroes are so boring. And when i try to kil la creep it takes 1 min. And some times when the creeps coming = the creep spawn. It takes to long time so i got to w8 like 20-30 sec for next wave i mean LMAO. Ok i can help u making better terrain and do some cooler heroes. But u need some one to fix ur triggers and stuff. Send me an pm with ur msn :) But i like ur minimap its awesome :D u could do it cooler tough i can do that for you if u want :p
wow thanks dude,but there is a little problem i dont have msn i have skype :con:
 
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ok man can u get msn then. Its just to download. And then add my msn i will send u.

Its very simple go to msn.com and then download and after that make an account sign up. And then logg in and il add u msn is the new generation stuff get it :D
 
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Probably a good idea to edit that email out and message it to him. Don't want your mothers email gettting spammed by unscrupulous (morally lacking/bad) people :)

Or, if he already has it, just delete it.
 
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