Fall Sunset

[Oziris]

Long time since I've done some art terrain! Hope you all like this.

~Oziris

 

[supertoinkz]

Hmm..is it just me or that dead tree (on the left) doesn't blend with the terrain?

 

[Maker]

To me it looks fantastic. But I'm not good at terraining.

 

[FibSaSk]

In my opinion it`s very reallistic, but I didn`t like the sun. I think it should be a bit less, because fall sunset is not supposed to make it hard to see everything. I especially like the camera you selected to print screen at

 

[Cihparg]

FIRST: This, is nice.
I don't really see anything required to be made, but you could optionally try to improve the hill, or whatever it is.
There's just one tree, some rocks and some grass, try to improve that a little.

SECOND: Fill the background up aswell, there's only a few trees on the rocks, it doesn't look too great when there's only mountains up ahead.

Rating for now: 7/10.
Rating Changed to: 5½/10.

 

[~Void~]

Keep it up with this style; this looks great.

 

[The_Olorin]

Allmost perfect, but theres one thing that disturbs me, is that backround has only 1 kind of trees, maybe you shold add 1 or 2 types of trees more. Keep up the work.

 

[elredir]

looks great,really like it
for one i dont like the water color(assuming that is water in the midground,or is it something like a swamp/marsh?)you should change it the brown color doesn't really fit imo

and add a lil more grass/bushes on the ledge on the right side(closest to the camera)
one thing a really like in this terrain is that it gives you the felling of hight/altitude,the sensation of looking over a valley,being on the ledge,love it

 

[Dr. House]

Pfff so disapointing siriously i mean comone..... xD nah just joking i like it although the background still could use a bit of work +rep aka chocolate cookie from DR. House

 

[Oziris]

Thanks everyone for the nice comments, I'll see if I can find the free time to fix ya'all suggested here.

 

[Raven0]

I think it looks epic

The water color looks the way it should (after all it is fall and you are looking through a sunset).

And I think the background is fine, you don't want to get too detailed in the background and detract from you'r primary focus in the foreground.

The rock from the fireplace comes out of the ground at one point.

Also the rocks around the tree are placed at a bad angle so they looks really choppy and un-real.

Perhaps change the angle of the waterfall, right now you can see that it is just 2d layers overlapped on top of eachother.

 

[Oziris]

Thanks Raven0, I also hope to see some art terrain from you soon.