Elves vs. Skeletons v.1.12a

[Moderator]

11:57, 10th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Approved
You must improve trigger skills. Gameplay is basic and much "any other AOS map" like, we want unique systems

 

[Skycraft]

You might want to have a look at this to get more people to want to play your map (if it is your map) -> Map Description Templates.

 

[Zaldazzor]

tnx man

 

[Slead]

nice map but i think you should add a Boss and 2 towers in the same place is too much but its a nice map

 

[Black-kitty]

Good map, odd races to fight each other though xD

 

[Wandering Soul]

1) Need more Items and Recipe in this map.
2) More heroes from each side (especially the Elves).

Suggestion:
1) Enlist Legendary Items from World of Warcraft.

 

[gtsimos]

lools good but as wandering soul said needs more items ! I give u 4/5 ! Keep upgrading it and if u can add special effects and more heroes this map can go big

 

[091846]

any anti invisble items , ppl really love to spam invisable

 

[InfernalTater]

The map preview seems like a waste of file size to me. All you did was squish a random wallpaper made by blizzard. Considering the fact that this game is called Elves vs. Skeletons, I don't think a wallpaper of a mountain king fighting a blademaster is appropriate. You quite literally used the opposite; the game consists of elves and undead, while the preview consists of a human and an orc.
Try to keep in mind that the point of a custom preview is to represent your map, not simply to increase the file size of your map by showing your favorite wallpaper.
Also, I suggest you use numbers for the listing, rather than letters. Just in case you end up adding more.
As for the map itself, I'll download it when I go home tomorrow evening and test it. From what I've read in your description, it looks like it might be a fun map.

 

[Squall_Leonheart]

might be good if u continue to update it with more unique game play. it has potential. 4/5

 

[Zaldazzor]

The map preview seems like a waste of file size to me. All you did was squish a random wallpaper made by blizzard. Considering the fact that this game is called Elves vs. Skeletons, I don't think a wallpaper of a mountain king fighting a blademaster is appropriate. You quite literally used the opposite; the game consists of elves and undead, while the preview consists of a human and an orc.
Try to keep in mind that the point of a custom preview is to represent your map, not simply to increase the file size of your map by showing your favorite wallpaper.
Also, I suggest you use numbers for the listing, rather than letters. Just in case you end up adding more.
As for the map itself, I'll download it when I go home tomorrow evening and test it. From what I've read in your description, it looks like it might be a fun map.

what are you talking about? the wallpaper is appropriate and don't judge my map cause you never played it. You didn't even know that there's a blademaster and mountain king in the map. play the map first than making nonescence.

 

[InfernalTater]

what are you talking about? the wallpaper is appropriate and don't judge my map cause you never played it. You didn't even know that there's a blademaster and mountain king in the map. play the map first than making nonescence.

You might learn to take criticism. I already said specifically in my comment that I was not judging your map. I already said specifically in my comment that I could not test your map yet, and that I would test it when I got home the next night. I also said that, based on the description, your map did look like it would be fun. The only thing I said that wasn't praising your map was that an orc and dwarf in the preview didn't quite seem appropriate for an elves vs skeletons map. And that comment was not intended to insult you, only to point out something for you to possibly change. If you are so easily offended, then I suppose I shouldn't waste time trying to help you improve anything in the first place. But I'll still waste time anyway. I'd rather see an Arthas vs Illidan, as this would better fit your map.

I know that a mountain king and blademaster are in the game, as these were listed on the heroes list. What I was pointing out was that they did not belong in the game. If you wish to keep them in your map, then I suggest you change the name to Horde vs Alliance, because that's what it really is currently; another clash of horde vs alliance heroes.

Just a quick tip, though, you should learn to better respond to criticism. If you don't like someone's suggestion, simply say that you prefer to keep it the way it is; don't respond aggressively. Criticism is intended to help you improve your work. Ask anyone who is successful, and they will tell you that they learned when they found out they were wrong, instead of being angry when it was pointed out.

 

[Zaldazzor]

You might learn to take criticism. I already said specifically in my comment that I was not judging your map. I already said specifically in my comment that I could not test your map yet, and that I would test it when I got home the next night. I also said that, based on the description, your map did look like it would be fun. The only thing I said that wasn't praising your map was that an orc and dwarf in the preview didn't quite seem appropriate for an elves vs skeletons map. And that comment was not intended to insult you, only to point out something for you to possibly change. If you are so easily offended, then I suppose I shouldn't waste time trying to help you improve anything in the first place. But I'll still waste time anyway. I'd rather see an Arthas vs Illidan, as this would better fit your map.

I know that a mountain king and blademaster are in the game, as these were listed on the heroes list. What I was pointing out was that they did not belong in the game. If you wish to keep them in your map, then I suggest you change the name to Horde vs Alliance, because that's what it really is currently; another clash of horde vs alliance heroes.

Just a quick tip, though, you should learn to better respond to criticism. If you don't like someone's suggestion, simply say that you prefer to keep it the way it is; don't respond aggressively. Criticism is intended to help you improve your work. Ask anyone who is successful, and they will tell you that they learned when they found out they were wrong, instead of being angry when it was pointed out.

I know that the Mountain King is not an elf and the Blademaster is not a skeleton, but the loading screen features two of my maps' heroes,and this is not a problem nor an error. I have difficulty on finding and creating a loading screen

 

[InfernalTater]

Well how about this: remove the mountain king and blademaster heroes from the game, because they don't fit.
There are plenty of arthas (undead) vs illidan (night elf) wallpapers that you could use instead. I really think the game would make more sense that way. If you want, I'm sure I can find you some Arthas vs Illidan wallpapers. I'll even make you a loading screen myself if you want, because the map does look promising.

 

[Eldubs]

Description gives not enough info about the game or the gameplay. I would of tested it. But i cant test a map of which i dont know nothing.

Eldubs

 

[bhusta]

Terrain:
The lanes looks a little bit empty.
There is a decent variation of tiles but you could add some doodads.

Heroes:
I played the "bone digger".
In my opinion he is too weak, you should raise his hit points or you give him a range attack.

Gameplay:
Have the different attacktypes any function?
You imported a lot of undead building which does not realy fit the skeleton theme. They look more like demon buildings.
The imported undead skins are a good choice.
The missle of the "ancient battle" tower is realy disturbing.
The imported command buttons does not fit the theme. There are many diffrent sets which could fit better.

You made good tooltips which makes items and abilities easier to understand.

The filename is too long. This map is not playable for many people.
I suggest you name it "EvS1.12a".

 

[thegreatninjaman]

this game is good at first but somethings that annoy me.

-creeps need less health or armor, its hard to last hit them
-creeps need to deal less damage and then scale into lategame
-heros need more health but not too much more
-change engineer to make him fit more. he has "air attack" which does less damage to structures wich basicly negates his "C". his "Z" also dosnt do very much damage early game and barly enough late game.
-blademasters sping thingy lasts too long
-filesize is huge and theres only less then 25 heros

 

[xXxMKDxXx]

NiCe MaP ! But small numb of items
hope you will fix / import new

 

[xXxMKDxXx]

4/5 rate!