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idk if you can call it "elven" but whatever
just ignore teh messyness :xxd:
 

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noez those trees are fine just dig them deep so they dont show their trunk
and tell me how to improve it so it gets legendary title xD
 
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While all of that orange works, it might work better with a few brown tree types mixed in to break up the sea of orange. Might, I do not have the map to tinker with.

This looks like an autumnal climate.

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well its ok you spend a lot time on this but it looks unnatural

just one little thing, compare the colours of all your trees with the picture or with ur imagination .... you ever seen something like this? i would say try to tint some trees try to use more variation maybe.

Also the height differences in your terrain and the picture given ... i would say it would be better if you use more height differences a bit like in the given pic.

Also you could try to use some archways in place of your roofs.

barring of this its a good terrain
 
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well its ok you spend a lot time on this but it looks unnatural

just one little thing, compare the colours of all your trees with the picture or with ur imagination .... you ever seen something like this? i would say try to tint some trees try to use more variation maybe.

Also the height differences in your terrain and the picture given ... i would say it would be better if you use more height differences a bit like in the given pic.

Also you could try to use some archways in place of your roofs.

barring of this its a good terrain

I couldnt have disagreed more. This terrain is just as epic as you said it were going to be Raid, and for that I salute you. It has its own style, its great achitecture. Hell, I suggest this thing for the legendary thread, its really an inspiration worthy piece of work.
 
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The architecture has his own style thats ok but like otheres also said ... the pure orange in the whole terrain ... i dont think i have to say much about this. its logical and who doesnt see this should improve his view.
Also like otheres said the heigth differences could bring it more in a epic way.

I know raid is a good terrainer
but if people dont hear on critics which are a bit longer than ... ah thats cool or aaah thats bad dunno why ... people will never get better.

I think if the orange thingy and maybe a bit height differences would be changed it could deserve a legendary title, otherewise no way, but there are othere pics in the legendary thread which are bader so do what you want ;)
 
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