Earth Fiend (work in progress)

[EvilYardGnome]

http://www.angelfire.com/nb/cryptic/pirate3.html

Gimme some suggestions.

 

[Saikann]

Argh, those bigass bold black lines really look bad to me. If you decrease their radius, i think it would look bettar. Otherwise try to add some variating colours to the wood, like a few oranges or yellows.

 

[Sopho]

The legs need more detail.
The lines could be lesser darker.
The body and wings are great though.