Dalaran's garden

[Moderator]

21:51, 22nd Feb 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[takakenji]

...wtf is with the description

 

[dodgax]

...wtf is with the description

be glad you don't know what happend

 

[zaperer]

Thats an awesome poem there,but i feel its misplaced-it should be on a blog or in a literature compose.Not here...

 

[Yabooer]

Mhm...

Well, descriptions are for describing a map. Go to off topic with your personal problems.

fysicly is PHYSICALLY
pathedic is PATHETIC
disserve is DESERVE

After that having to fix all those little things for your self.

I'm guessing that some girl broke up with you, whether it was an Egirlfriend or real girlfriend I don't care. You're young as everyone can tell. You'll grow out of it, if not I recommend therapy because self inflicting cuts as you posted above is minor so far but can and will escalate to major inflictions.

 

[dodgax]

fysicly is PHYSICALLY
pathedic is PATHETIC
disserve is DESERVE
.

whell i'm never good at my typing xd

I'm guessing that some girl broke up with you, whether it was an Egirlfriend or real girlfriend I don't care. You're young as everyone can tell. You'll grow out of it, if not I recommend therapy because self inflicting cuts as you posted above is minor so far but can and will escalate to major inflictions.

how the hell do you know that

 

[takakenji]

he was guessing.

 

[dodgax]

he was guessing.

ok .....

 

[micromonkey]

i think you really should add a description that tells more about the maps...not about what you feel or the things that affect your everyday life OUTSIDE the hive. No offense, but no one really cares much. You should also fix grammar. There is an auto correcting feature in the text box you know.

 

[dodgax]

i think you really should add a description that tells more about the maps...not about what you feel or the things that affect your everyday life OUTSIDE the hive. No offense, but no one really cares much. You should also fix grammar. There is an auto correcting feature in the text box you know.

whell there is only one tiny bit that doesn't envolve the hive thats the suicide stuff for the rest it does envolve the hive but you don't know what happend and lets keep it like that shall we?

 

[micromonkey]

whell there is only one tiny bit that doesn't envolve the hive thats the suicide stuff for the rest it does envolve the hive but you don't know what happend and lets keep it like that shall we?

YES MY FUHRER! lol jk

 

[dodgax]

YES MY FUHRER! lol jk

xD but i'll change the description

 

[Craka_J]

Suicidal? Yeah. That's not weird at all. Just a hint for the future, never express your feelings via the internet. It's a bad place!

And for the record, you spelled:

• whell = Well
• envolve = Involve
• happend = Happened

PS: "you don't know what happend and lets keep it like that shall we?" contradicts the whole feelings thing in your map description and the "how the hell do you know that". Just sayin'!

 

[dead-man-walking]

Judging from the Screenshots, you have improved since you were banned. Well, too symmetrical in my opinion. Also, needz moar Tile Variations. Not testing for now.

 

[zaperer]

same, not reviewing till it gets improved,great potential there though, but improve the English first, would be appreciated by many. And as for the poem part,i care.

 

[dodgax]

unit's used coming soon

 

[Septimus]

Disapprove

1) Inbalance hostile creep. North West goblin laboratory was guarded by level 9 heroes with 4 creep level 2-3 while the South East was guard by 4 creep less than level 3?

2) Contain destructible/doodad such as Elven Gate, it could cause AI to bug because they do not know how to break the door. You should have add destroyed/open gate instead of a locked one.

3) Tavern are not suppose to be guarded by any hostile unit.

4) Almost 80% of the terrain was empty, all you did was make the tileset symmetry and nothing much was pour into it. It was unacceptable especially for such a small map.

5) Goldmine resources was way too high, you could have make an alternate gold mine instead of setting each player with only 1 gold mine.

6) Item drop inbalance and some group of creep does not even drop anything at all.

I also do not recommend you to protect a map, especially if it was a melee map.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

 

[dodgax]

Disapprove

1) Inbalance hostile creep. North West goblin laboratory was guarded by level 9 heroes with 4 creep level 2-3 while the South East was guard by 4 creep less than level 3?

2) Contain destructible/doodad such as Elven Gate, it could cause AI to bug because they do not know how to break the door. You should have add destroyed/open gate instead of a locked one.

3) Tavern are not suppose to be guarded by any hostile unit.

4) Almost 80% of the terrain was empty, all you did was make the tileset symmetry and nothing much was pour into it. It was unacceptable especially for such a small map.

5) Goldmine resources was way too high, you could have make an alternate gold mine instead of setting each player with only 1 gold mine.

6) Item drop inbalance and some group of creep does not even drop anything at all.

I also do not recommend you to protect a map, especially if it was a melee map.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

XD u downloaded version 1.2 not version 1.3 thats where the thing went wrong

 

[Septimus]

XD u downloaded version 1.2 not version 1.3 thats where the thing went wrong

v1.3 are still at unacceptable stage, it doesn't have any much differ apart from reducing the hostile undead hero level from 9 to 3 and those tiny update you did such as adding more scourge unit and changing tiles.

Anyway, melee map does not use hero as hostile unit.

Everything i mention are still not being fix

There is many symmetry genre melee map that are done much better in comparison with this.

I suggest you to view more symmetry melee map before making any more of it to get a much clear visual of how it could be better.

 

[dodgax]

v1.3 are still at unacceptable stage, it doesn't have any much differ apart from reducing the hostile undead hero level from 9 to 3 and those tiny update you did such as adding more scourge unit and changing tiles.

Anyway, melee map does not use hero as hostile unit.

Everything i mention are still not being fix

There is many symmetry genre melee map that are done much better in comparison with this.

I suggest you to view more symmetry melee map before making any more of it to get a much clear visual of how it could be better.

ok now i dont understand eny more i had a map without scourge ect and then dead-man-walking says it is to symmetrical now u say that it isn't symmetrical god i'm confused

 

[Septimus]

ok now i dont understand eny more i had a map without scourge ect and then dead-man-walking says it is to symmetrical now u say that it isn't symmetrical god i'm confused

We're referring to the tileset being way too symmetrical, but little effort was given to the destructible/doodad.

 

[dodgax]

We're referring to the tileset being way too symmetrical, but little effort was given to the destructible/doodad.

so if i now just make the unit level's and loot even and place more doodads in symmetrical formes and lower the goldmine rescource and make it unprotected will it then atleast have a 2/5?