[Comic]:"Desert Raiders Vol. 2"

[Dr00d]

Progresses the story. Hope you like it better then the last!

 

[Pyritie]

Scientific. (not sientific)

During. (not durring)

Paradise. (not paradice)

And they keep jumping around in places. One minute they're outside the cave the next they're inside Gadgetzan.

I like this type of comic better. Much less retarded.

 

[Wolverabid]

*blerg*

The images are far too wide: they really stretch the page layout for those who view the site in 1024x768. Keeping image widths to 700 pixels or less would make the thread a lot easier to view: no horizontal scrolling would be required!

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

This story has a much better plot than the first, but the italic font on the yellow was hard.

Well, they noticed. Should I post the .txt file?

 

[brad.dude03]

This may not be random and pointless, but the plot still sucks.

And yeah, this thing stretches the hell out of the screen and i'm even running 1280 X 1024.

 

[donut3.5]

Don't like the yellow text.. but its better than the last.
The last part sounds like a friggin Zelda game. "Find 3 of this and I will aid you.."
--donut3.5--

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

And they keep jumping around in places. One minute they're outside the cave the next they're inside Gadgetzan.

Umm, it's called a flashback!

 

[Dr00d]

No, they never jump to Gadgetzan. If you read the bio on Trinx you'll see they live in ZF. He goes to the top of the pyrimad when he talks with Rexxar.

And yea in Firefox it has a bad scroll bar. I had to look at it in IE get rid of it.

 

[Pyritie]

1920 x 1200 ftw!

 

[Elenai]

The title Desert "raoders" would'nt have anything to do with RaoDaoZao would it?

 

[brad.dude03]

I was just gonna ask.

I'm pretty sure he'd be appalled to be even distantly related to this thing.

 

[Dr00d]

Wow... I feel dumb right now...

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

Can't you see that O is next to I?

There are 9 other mistakes I'm afraid Dr00d, can I point them out?