Carried

[8512590215848]

Icon doesn't work. Its a mess of pale colors without contrasts and highlights.

1. Make black or dark background.
2. Fill your shapes with flat colours.
3. Using selection tool shape your light areas and make it brighter
4. Using selection tool shape your dark areas and make it darker
5. Using brush tool add light highlight at the edge of light shape
6. Using brush tool add a _light_ highlight at the edge of your _dark_ shape.
7. Reupload your icon.

 

[Cheshire]

thanks for the detailed feedback, I'll see what I can do (using paint)

 

[Cheshire]

is this better?



(obv if it is I'll put it up in all the right formats...)

 

[8512590215848]

Now way better. But still need some improvements. Add shadow under the head and under to boots, at the face add shadow under nose and lips.
Add shine effect on the metal - give more darkness to the edges, and give a bit brightness at the flat part.

 

[Cheshire]

how now?




Edit: actually I think now is better:



also - i can't figure out how to delete/edit the old icons

 

[8512590215848]

Approved.

 

[8512590215848]

Please remove old version from submission.

 

[A Normal Yandere]

Could be useful for a goblin portrait/ability imo, good job.