BTNWrench

[Panda]

2nd addition to my robot/tinker bundle.

 

[8512590215848]

Remove stright black line that defines shape. Use different color (darken with small shift into cooler tone) to define your shape.

 

[Panda]

Remove stright black line that defines shape. Use different color (darken with small shift into cooler tone) to define your shape.

Gonna update bunch of icons tonight thanks for your input sir!

*Used a light to dark brown color instead of black.

 

[8512590215848]

First row, second image - is an illustration of what i meant for shape definition. Generally it is always stacks on lightning use (third and fourth images in first row are about this)

 

[Panda]

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First row, second image - is an illustration of what i meant for shape definition. Generally it is always stacks on lightning use (third and fourth images in first row are about this)

Ok I see what your saying, so should I edit the lightning on this or?

 

[8512590215848]

Ok I see what your saying, so should I edit the lightning on this or?

there should not be a black\dark line defining shape as it's on a first image in first row.

 

[deepstrasz]

Hmm, a bit uneven and not refined. 3/5.

 

[8512590215848]

Still looks plastic and substandart. I gived example of how should 3D object be defined. It shouldn't have black outlines defining shape, that is a poor and unacceptable style. If you have troubles updating this icon - rework it.

 

[Panda]

Still looks plastic and substandart. I gived example of how should 3D object be defined. It shouldn't have black outlines defining shape, that is a poor and unacceptable style. If you have troubles updating this icon - rework it.

Yeah thinking about restarting over, I have some ideas from some pictures I found ill update soon.

 

[PrinceYaser]

I love the metal looking of the new update. It's smooth.

 

[8512590215848]

May you define the darkened side by lightening the background (a blueish thing)? Anyway it is already better than it was

 

[Panda]

May you define the darkened side by lightening the background (a blueish thing)? Anyway it is already better than it was

Thanks man this one was a struggle to figure out how to do it, will update soon!

 

[8512590215848]

Still be too dark.
For a better look change background to something like a bright blue cogwheel

 

[Panda]

I tried the cogwheel, it didn't look right so I changed the color up.

 

[Murlocologist]

It is a single object illustration and there isn't too much space for working on it composition-wise. Material could be better detailed but it is ok. Colors are however too simple, I'd suggest to observe below icon for adding more tones to color scheme. Background effect could be transformed into outline glow.

 

[Panda]

It is a single object illustration and there isn't too much space for working on it composition-wise. Material could be better detailed but it is ok. Colors are however too simple, I'd suggest to observe below icon for adding more tones to color scheme. Background effect could be transformed into outline glow.
View attachment 270638

Thanks for input I did all I can too the wrench so Ill edit the background effect.

 

[8512590215848]

Work is fine. Approved!

 

[Gumberbunbder]

Thanks for the icon, looks very gnomey