BTNSuccubus

[Moderator]

20:44, 7th Jun 2012
I3lackDeath: This looks great, you did well to improve this icon. I'd still decrease the size of the upper lip (decrease duck face factor), but that's just me. Keep up the good work!

 

[I3lackDeath]

She still has a pretty masculine facial structure.

Faces are hard to draw (trust me, I know...), but it would be great if you managed to give her smoother/rounder structures. References might help aswell.

 

[RandomPogi]

I think she needs more shading. And yes, she does look masculine. ^~^

 

[Sin'dorei300]

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[I3lackDeath]

Another big aspect why she looks very masculine are her eyebrows. Succubi are VERY sensual (and sexual) beings, so try to embed their aspects.

A very good reference would be dickxunder's Prime Matron model. Check out its portrait, it has all that you want to show with your icon: female facial structures and VERY sensual, aesthetic qualities.

Oh, and keep up the good work! Always nice to see someone work hard on their projects.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

@13lackDeath
Thx! I'll try to improve it!

 

[rcshaggy]

How about you try and use this for some ideas?

 

[I3lackDeath]

This one is the best version:

The lips are well shaped, the eyebrows are elegant, yet still prominent.
The only things you should change about this one would be:

• skin colour (keep it redish, pink looks very artificial)
• proper shading between the horns and the face (it currently looks like a mask, the horns being in the background):
  
  

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Ok! Updated! How it looks now?

 

[I3lackDeath]

Ok! Updated! How it looks now?

Great, except that I might have expressed my thoughts with the wrong words: you need to shade the transitions of the horns so that it actually looks like they're coming out of her skull.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Ok!

EDIT: Updated again! I think it looks enough good now!

 

[I3lackDeath]

Great hair, but you should keep the previous lips. Your patience and effort really pay off.

 

[rcshaggy]

Man you are really improving so damn much.
I'm impressed as well in which this icon went from a male femine Succu to a sexy and hot one. LOL...

 

[Sin'dorei300]

@13lackDeath
Why to use previous lips? These are much better, imo.

@Warlord
Thx man!

 

[I3lackDeath]

@13lackDeath
Why to use previous lips? These are much better, imo.

As I told you before, the previous lips were well shaped and looked natural.
The current ones look very "procedure gone bad"-ish, artificial (quite too big, and the placement is wrong).

Combine the previous lips with the current state of the icon and it's done.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Updated again.

 

[RandomPogi]

Oh man, THIS IS EPIC! Too bad I cant give you rep yet.

 

[Legion_King]

I think the mouth needs to be either slightly smaller or lower, that part looks a bit weird to me.

 

[Remixer]

@I3lackDeath

Yeah indeed... Every morning I see succubusses around my dog's cage...

 

[Chaosy]

5/5 awesome man

 

[rcshaggy]

Hey BloodElf when I clicked refresh the icon changed from the old one to the new one.

 

[Cakedog345]

Good job !

 

[Legeon]

A complete and a great icons. Well done .