BTNStaff

[Moderator]

02:14, 15th Oct 2009
enjoy: This is really bad. Lack of everything. You need to go look at some tutorials. Here is CRAZYRUSSIANS icon tutorial. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2d-art-tutorials-281/icons-crazyrussian-93857/

 

[Dentothor]

I don't think anyone could possibly tell what this is. It is smudge lines with more smudge lines. Try to define everything out a whole lot more. and try to show the head of the staff. it is the most exciting part of the staff. so you shouldn't leave it out.

Really fix that BG. It is almost too smudged out to make sense of. and try to avoid solid colours. I can tell right now, that you only used 2 - 3 colours. Not good.

0/5 Try fixing this whole thing up. because right now, it does not look good at all.

~Dentothor

 

[supertoinkz]

lol, its not even a staff
and it needs moar definition and moar lightings and shadings

 

[X-OMG-X]

Cant see what it is.

 

[Soul Theft]

this is bad

 

[kikicamkd]

Thanks

Thanks for the comment!

 

[The Panda]

If your gonna make a icon at least look at the advice and update it, As the comment above i find that not funny.

 

[Dentothor]

agreed. Anyone who does this and then laughs at other people while their eyes are tormented can only be a Jackass.
I tried to put a decent review up while my eyes were burning (i couldn't see the keyboard!!) and you just laugh at it. Come on man....

 

[enjoy]

agreed. Anyone who does this and then laughs at other people while their eyes are tormented can only be a Jackass.
I tried to put a decent review up while my eyes were burning (i couldn't see the keyboard!!) and you just laugh at it. Come on man....

To dizz peoples work like that, isn't really sweet either.