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08:56, 14th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Obviously a rather simple piece of work, and the sword is literally lost within the flame effect. Add more contrast to the object, or at least use a more realistic, grey/close to black color scheme for the blade. Afterwards, try to make the sword's shape more realistic, by adding pieces of details, like spikes, broken parts, a custom handle or whatever you can come up with. Don't forget to sharpen it afterwards.
Rejected until updated.
8:35, 15th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The things I said still apply.
zombie2279: Obviously a rather simple piece of work, and the sword is literally lost within the flame effect. Add more contrast to the object, or at least use a more realistic, grey/close to black color scheme for the blade. Afterwards, try to make the sword's shape more realistic, by adding pieces of details, like spikes, broken parts, a custom handle or whatever you can come up with. Don't forget to sharpen it afterwards.
Rejected until updated.
8:35, 15th Aug 2009
zombie2279: The things I said still apply.