BTNScorpion

[Moderator]

14:23, 23rd Nov 2009
enjoy: Needs more shading, highlights and difinition. Doesn't look like metal.

enjoy: Define it more.

 

[liquidfox]

hi, comment pls

 

[Soul Theft]

needs more shadings and give it more ''scorpion'' shape

 

[liquidfox]

Here is the example of picture how a scorpion looks like and I have no idea what you mean perhaps you can give me an example on how should it looks like?

I understand that warcraft icon need more shading and you agree with it too but the reasons I draw the icon in this style is to make it more realistic rather than following what majority are doing.

Maybe you can describe what is more scorpion style? And I will look into it.

 

[kola]

this is too flat. almost doesnt look 3D.

 

[liquidfox]

i will fix it later

 

[cookies4you]

WOOT! ANOTHER GUN! nice btw... doesn't look like metal..

 

[liquidfox]

done!
next gun will be revolver!

 

[Mobilize]

okey...
It still looks like its made of plastic, and the deal with that is...
*Try making it a darker color, it should help with the highlights and shading. And really, no gun is made out of really light steel.
*Further on, like in your pic, instead of making it <gray/white> try making it <gray/blue>, that should help with the realism, too.
*I got a really good review from oh_snap, and it would apply to you, too. Just that mine was about shading, your icon doesn't got any. But well, you might as well give it a look.

Mob_glock review by oh_snap: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1250932-post12.html

*also, go look at other guns that has already been made, look at the shading, source of light and so on.
*Giving it an angle could help improve the overall feeling of the icon.

 

[cookies4you]

make the color a little darker please. it looks not like metal

 

[liquidfox]

does it looks better now?

 

[Mobilize]

totally, that's much bettur.
The next step is defined highlights.
As said, Read oh_snap's review.